music Some Swedish House I'm working on

[Vinyl Scratch. 604]

So, I've decided to back down from hard dance music (Because I suck shit at making it) and Have moved on to house music, at this point it sounds a little repetitive, buts that's because I've left a lot of room for vocals, but I don't have a vocalist...anypony interested?

I'm not sure if I'm going to make it pony related or not yet, it's nowhere near finished.

Critique is appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/bassfreq-official/swedish-house-track-unfinished

[Lisa 5,553]

Definitely sounds rough. But I'm sure some vocals could fix that. Nice song. c:

[Vinyl Scratch. 604]

Definitely sounds rough. But I'm sure some vocals could fix that. Nice song. c:

Yeah, as I said it's nowhere near finished it still needs to be mixed and mastered and such

[Hansel 1,512]

Sup yo. x3

 

I really like the melodies and such, and the progression is really nice as well. So yeah, really nice job.

 

My only real critique is the kick, it sounds a little flat and quiet, especially at the start when it's the only percussion you're using. I'm not sure which DAW or what kick patch you're using, but maybe play about with it a little. I know you're going for a progressive feel, so you probably shouldn't add too much to the beat at first, but perhaps a little highat symbol in between the kick just to give it a bit more depth up until the 45 second mark?

Between 1:00-1:14, the kick works fine on it's own.

 

Just my two pennies.

Edited March 28, 2014 by Hansel

[Vinyl Scratch. 604]

@@Hansel,

Thank's I'll fix that up

I'm currently still using fl studio but I'm trying to shift to ableton

[Hansel 1,512]

@@Hansel,

Thank's I'll fix that up

I'm currently still using fl studio but I'm trying to shift to ableton

 

Hey, if FL Studio is good enough for Deadmau5 to produce House, it's good enough for anyone.

Edited March 28, 2014 by Hansel

[Vinyl Scratch. 604]

Hey, if FL Studio is good enough for Deadmau5 to produce House, it's good enough for anyone.

Yeah, I eventually want to move over to logic pro anyway so I might as well stay with fl studio for the meantime

[Scootaloodle 1,623]

Pretty good production: can’t fault that. Although I’m the biggest House head on the planet, and to me that Swedish so called "House music " isn’t real House music at all.

 

But that aside, it's still pretty well done so hope you find a vocalist and all

Edited March 28, 2014 by Asherdangerdash

[kotafoxx 5]

So, I've decided to back down from hard dance music (Because I suck shit at making it) and Have moved on to house music, at this point it sounds a little repetitive, buts that's because I've left a lot of room for vocals, but I don't have a vocalist...anypony interested?

I'm not sure if I'm going to make it pony related or not yet, it's nowhere near finished.

Critique is appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/bassfreq-official/swedish-house-track-unfinished

 

Very nicely put together, I can see vocals fitting in there nicely if done right... I would personally add more transition elements, and a breakdown... do some good mastering on your bass levels and whatnot and you've got yourself a killer track man bravo