books I have been making a story...

[Phoenix Flam 48]

I was up writing a bit for my book I have been writing and I had a thought, "What would ponies' think of this?"

 

So I took the plunge and i am going to roughly lay it out for you and this way i should not give much away, but see how the community reacts to it. Then once the first page comes out in September you can see for your self the true nature of the book.

 

Now I must warn you it dose mess with history a little, but I have avoided most of the cannon....I hope.

 

Using History learnt from the MLP-Fim episodes I managed to make a mini time line that I have been following till recently were I have slowed down my jump through time, But i will explain that a little later.

 

To make it clear I have already written 56,496 words covering 95 pages. So I am not going back and i am not stopping.

 

so i have broken the book up in to sections because it has become so long...in fact it has become so long I have but all other books I was thinking of writing because my mind is flooded with ideas. the sections are letter based and then number based. so secretion for example section A goes A1-7 however all the sections after that go 1-6. I have recently finished the rough writing of E5. now though A1 is only one section it dose cover 3 pages and so do most of the other sections so there is a lot per section.

 

The story has been based 1900 years back from the first MLP-Fim episode. So Princess Luna is 900 years from being trapped in the moon. so it is before the Sombra incident and the Discord Fiasco but they come in time...however the character in the book dose not.

 

Now to clear up and lay it out. my book is a sort of side story from the main. Similar to how war in the north is still lord of the rings just you never see it in the movies.

 

Now my book starts in the Frozen North. Why you may ask...Well if you look it almost looks cut off like there is nothing there so I amused well there was something there but there is nothing now...or so we think. this is were my book comes in because "History is written by the Victor" so what if the victor hid something that is now never seen in Equestria?

 

My Book has a bit of its own history so here it is.

 

after Ponyville was made there was not just ponies living there. There was another race of creates living in the lands and they protected the ponies' from evil creates that could not be resend or communicated with as there were just killers. The race that protected them were the Wolves.

 

This peaceful alliance worked out for a while, the wolves hunted and killed these creates that were of pure evil and in exchange the wolves would be given land and homes. However by killing and eating evil and then adding a bit of jealousy the wolves began to Question the fairness of the alliance. the evil from the craters they killed had taken over there minds and clouded there judgment.

 

On the night of the red moon this evil that now controlled the wolves took over and the wolves went on a rage and decided that they would take all the land they pleas. Luna and Celestia acted swiftly and aggressively as they knew this day would come. They banished the wolves to the north and as they did so the ponies' that lived there fled and took the last train out of the north.

 

However the train was traveling to fast and as it was in the tunnel the train derailed and crashed, with that the tunnel collapsed. However every pony except one pony got out alive, sadly a little filly was buried inside one of the carriages, she was never recovered.

 

All knowledge of wolves was forgotten and all the knowledge that remains are that of Timber wolves and one history book in the old pony village in the north, now abandoned. 500 years had passed since then and the truth of why wolves had been banished was as skewed as ever.

 

The wolves blame the pony sisters for there banishment and are angry and always will be.

 

so ye there it is my books history...leading to now when the character who is a wolf is born.

 

To put it short, strange tern of events lead to him going to Equestria and trying to become a hero proving that not all wolves are evil. There are up's, Down's and some tears...no joke i have had to stop three times writing this book because i cried a little. Weather you will or not is to be seen, it could have been because i was tired or I was getting to attached.

 

So there you go, I cant tell you any more because it will ruin the story. However I can give you the same extract I gave the people who have read my profile. Think your selves lucky for that as I then after a day or to took it off and said it would never be seen again till September.

 

so i am braking my own rule here, but it is for you to get a better understanding of what this book is about and let you give me some better reactions. so i will stop talking now and let the extract speak for me. pleas feel free to tell me what you think.

 

And  a Phoenix is born. A1

 

I was born in the far and icy north just outside Equestria. When I was born the elder wolves were confused as they had never seen a wolf like me before, I did not resemble my mother in any way as well as being born without a father, a miracle pup. My mother was a standard wolf with brown fur were as I was a wolf that had a rare colour and some never before seen markings. My fur on my head was slightly longer and was a natural coal colour, my paws were also coal coloured as well as the tip of my tail. All this was then clashed with my main body colour which is a snow white almost pure. Despite how I looked my mother called me Phoenix and said she had a feeling I would be great. However she had no idea what I was to become.

 

At a young age about two years old, things began to happen around me. When I was bullied by some of the older and stronger pups some of the wounds I sustained would heal faster. Another odd thing happened when out for a walk near the mountains with my mother, there was an avalanche and I was swept under. However when I woke up I was at the foot of the mountain and the snow around me had melted in to a small puddle of water.

Edited April 3, 2014 by Phoenix Flam

[Phoenix Flam 48]

Hummm I think I scared every one away...To much text I guess.

[Jorguil 54]

Did you post the story in the thread or in a link if it is in the thread I think it be best to link to it so you can save space explain how far you are just my opinion.

[Storm Shine 1,196]

*Huggles* I totally like it!

[Phoenix Flam 48]

To be honest this is all wrong so I may deleat it is I knew how.