searching The Dark Reign

[OG Blaze 269]

This is a role play about other worldly gods from another world, they've made their place here on Equestria and plan to stay. Their only intention is to enslave all pony kind and any who try to deny their power are tortured and killed. They claim to be from another dimension with intentions of building something from the slaves they retrieve. Their names are foreign, but translate to.

Trinity

Ausar

Torc

Iris

Deus

The WidowMaker

 

A time of darkness and despair has fallen over Equestria, with Celestia, Cadence, and Luna dead, the gods are the only ones keeping the moon and sun in perfect order.

Will anyone stand up to the tyrants or will Equestria fall to shambles.

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Rules:

No godmodding

No super over powered OC's

You must be a frequent poster

Romance is allowed but won't be a focus

No Mane 6

Princess are dead, but may resurrect

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Any other questions post below.

All entries below

[Mr. Critical 434]

Sure. I'll join ya. Gimme a sec to see if my characters are up to date.

[OG Blaze 269]

Alright thanks homie g

[Mr. Critical 434]

Okay. I'm done. I'll be using Critical. He's in my Signature.

I guess no wants to join this one.

[Chivalry Knight 161]

Ill join with Chivalry Knight, Link in my sig.

[OG Blaze 269]

Ill join with Chivalry Knight, Link in my sig.

We got one other person, but I don't think three people will be enough.

We'll drag this out a bit longer and if no one else joins, I'll figure something out.

[Anon In Equestria 57]

I'll Join with unholy justice.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/unholy-justice-r6269

[OG Blaze 269]

I'll Join with unholy justice.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/unholy-justice-r6269

Alright we got a few people,

Maybe just one more.

[madpenguin44 38]

Got enough room for one more? 

Hope you don't mind that I can't cope and paste on my computer.

I'll be using a mare called Shadow Dust. If you want to know more then go to character database and search up Mafia 404 and you'll find her. Hope I can join! I have high hopes for this RP.

[OG Blaze 269]

Got enough room for one more? 

Hope you don't mind that I can't cope and paste on my computer.

I'll be using a mare called Shadow Dust. If you want to know more then go to character database and search up Mafia 404 and you'll find her. Hope I can join! I have high hopes for this RP.

I'll Join with unholy justice.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/unholy-justice-r6269

Ill join with Chivalry Knight, Link in my sig.

Okay. I'm done. I'll be using Critical. He's in my Signature.

I guess no wants to join this one.

Alright I think this would be a good amount for a role play, hope you all are frequent posters,

If you don't mind me asking, I would like a sample post from all of you, just so I could see what I'd be dealing with during the RP,

I won't need one from you Critical, I've seen you role play.

[madpenguin44 38]

@~Bugatti_veyron~

 

Sure, but what would you like us to post about?

[OG Blaze 269]

@~Bugatti_veyron~

 

Sure, but what would you like us to post about?

Just something from the role play above, how you would post like an entry post.

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Ok here is my sample post.

 

Justice looked up to notice the undead guard was standing in front of him, the black armor he wore was stained with the barely noticeable blood of its victims. Justice fired another ark of lightning at the creature, his attacks doing nothing to halt to movements of the corrupted royal guard.

[Chivalry Knight 161]

Ok here is my sample post.

Justice looked up to notice the undead guard was standing in front of him, the black armor he wore was stained with the barely noticeable blood of its victims. Justice fired another ark of lightning at the creature, his attacks doing nothing to halt to movements of the corrupted royal guard.

The undead guard was about to attack Justice. It lifted its blade in the air. Suddenly a large bubble shot out of the shadow and engulfed Justice. The bubble repealed the undead guards attack and staggered it. A rather large sword comes out of the shadows and slices at the undead guard. Causing it to dodge back away from Justice. "Hey! You alright there" calls out a blue coated, black maned unicorn who emerges from the shadows. "Dont worry, I Chivalry Knight, am here to protect you and help anyone in need!" He says with a cocky grin.

 

My sample post

[madpenguin44 38]

Shadow dust appeared behind them with a dagger in her hoof. She's not the type of pony who fights a lot, but she was definitely good at it. Without them knowing she was behind them she said " you guys need some help?" Even if they didn't want help she as still going to help them. She was going to take down the guard with them whether they liked it or not!

Sample post

Edited April 25, 2014 by madpenguin44

[OG Blaze 269]

Ok here is my sample post.

Justice looked up to notice the undead guard was standing in front of him, the black armor he wore was stained with the barely noticeable blood of its victims. Justice fired another ark of lightning at the creature, his attacks doing nothing to halt to movements of the corrupted royal guard.

Very nice, detail is good and makes sense, isn't bland.

The undead guard was about to attack Justice. It lifted its blade in the air. Suddenly a large bubble shot out of the shadow and engulfed Justice. The bubble repealed the undead guards attack and staggered it. A rather large sword comes out of the shadows and slices at the undead guard. Causing it to dodge back away from Justice. "Hey! You alright there" calls out a blue coated, black maned unicorn who emerges from the shadows. "Dont worry, I Chivalry Knight, am here to protect you and help anyone in need!" He says with a cocky grin.

My sample post

Looks good, try to work on consistent tense, and also maybe add a little more detail, other wise looks goods.

Shadow dust appeared behind them with a dagger in her hoof. She's not the type of pony who fights a lot, but she was definitely good at it. Without them knowing she was behind them she said " you guys need some help?" Even if they didn't want help she as still going to help them. She was going to take down the guard with them whether they liked it or not!

Sample post

Awesome! Added a little extra detail when needed and wasn't generic,

Very nice.