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  1. ''Well, of course, it's a children cartoon and unicorns aren't real!'' - You could say. But because I have Asperger and sometimes I overanalyze everything just like Twilight, I found a lot of errors. Now, let's see what is and what isn't an error. Unicorns exist, they have their planet, they behave like humans but don't know what humans are - Realistic, because it's based on us. When their behavior is realistic, we don't care if magic is real - bonus points if the physics of magic are explained. Ponies accidentaly have architecture and low technology similar to ours, Pinkie's hand glove- Plausible, because there are bipedal species in Equestria which could explain door handles and tools. It's possible that ponies copied things from those cultures. Los Pegasus, Manehattan, Canterlot - Hardly Plausible, because they would need to have a nearly identical history to ours to come up with such names. Puns are fun, but they ruin the plausibility. Arcade Cabinets, Twilight's Lab, Electricity - Far Fetched, because it's really confusing which level of technology Equestria is at. There is not extreme poverty, so the houses are build with the highest level possible. It seems to be 19 century with medieval stuff, which doesn't explain Arcade Cabinets. Twilight couldn't build that lab which is obviously hi-tech without knowledge from books - which would be accessible for everyone. It isn't explained what runs on magic or electricity - and there isn't a conflict betwen these two. There is no explanation why Earth Ponies and pegasuses are not learning about electricity and technology, if the magic is given such importance. Twilight speaking about Casanova, Heart- shaped windows on Friendship Express, References to other shows from our universe, Pinkie's Hand glove, Groucho Mask, SHERLOCK HOLMES - Unrealistic, because Casanova is a human from real world, Heart shaped winows on a Train are just ridiculous (Not to mention G3.5 like). All references ruin the plausbility, even the sneak ones. Groucho Mask is a very ridiculous thing that ruins plausibility for me. There is no bipedal species in Equestria that has a human like nose. And for the love of all that's holy, the Sherlock Holmes episode is officially the most ridiculous one. It's a reference that RUINED the plausibility in this episode. I know that this is a children cartoon, but if Lauren Faust was careful not to make too many references to humans, why couldn't they make sure that there won't be any errors like these? They cared about a good stories, why not care about being at least plausible? There are many cartoons, like Ben 10 UA or many Toonami ones that were very realistic about behavior and plausibility. Just because MLP is for children, doesn't mean it has to be like this. I still think that the show is fun, it's just that I can see some holes
  2. I would approach her as a human. And I would know all her secrets, so I could prove that I'm just a fan of her living his dream.
  3. When I think about being her (Or Twilight) I usually get very...you know. If I would be Twilight or Rarity, I would do some special things with my body. Would you do the same, if you were transformed into Rarity?
  4. I usually want to be Twilight, but I made a bronyland test some time ago and it says I'm half Twilight and Half Rarity, with a marginally more Twilight. I think that this is because I really dislike swearing and I also think that hatred is weakness, and Rarity is a very polite pony. So sometimes I also want to be Rarity. Not to mention, her body is sexy...
  5. Wow, finally someone chose portal to Equestria! If I would choose it, I would of course choose the 6 hours transformation. I would be Twilight, my favorite pony and character ever. I would be her friend, perhaps we would love each other, and I would also like to kiss Celestia's nostrils.
  6. After becoming Twilight, (12 Hours and Original Memories) I would spend my first day finally being happy and then I would have fun with my new horn and magic.
  7. But you would only have one hour for a day. And 10 minutes for Luna.
  8. So would you change back into a human sometimes? As for me, I sleep 6 hours, so I would just have to sleep, stay as human for 6 hours and then, 12 hours as a sexy and most importantly intelligent unicorn.
  9. So what would you do in an average day when being Rarity? Bumping because I've worked for too long on this thread.
  10. Hmm, so most of you think that Twilight form would be so useful. I agree, but I would like to become her for other reasons, such as the beauty of her body. With her memories, I could actually be her, if I could ignore mine. But I made the bronyand personality test some months ago, an it says I'm half Twilight and half Rarity. So it would be nice to be Rarity too. I won't lie, I would use both forms for some ''special'' stuff (Especially Rarity, hehe...), but mostly to be happy and have some powers.
  11. And IF I would decide to choose Rarity, I would go for 24 Hour transformation time - If I can feel like a lady, then I would like to always feel like this.
  12. You will be now given power to transform into one of Mane 6 for a few hours each day. You will still be on Earth, and apart from your power, your life will be the same. Note that you will transform into a copy of a pony, so the original one will be unharmed. You can choose your form only once. You trigger the transformation by thinking about your cutie mark, and you turn back into a human by thinking about moving your hand. When you are transformed, you don't have memories of that pony, but you have her personality. While you are capable of doing everything that your pony can do, you don't know how to do it, for example you can fly as Rainbow Dash, but you don't know how at beginning. Every day, starting at 00:00, you get 1 hour of your form, which means that you can be transformed for a maximum of one hour each day. It doesn't have to be one transformation - You can stay as a pony for 15 minutes and later for 45 minutes. Unused time will not add up to next day and you automatically turn into human at 00:00. If you are flying when your time is up or you turn back, you will be teleported to ground first. In a minute, I will give you 100 points to upgrade your form, but first, let's see which form suits you the best! Twilight Sparkle (Unicorn) When transformed... + You have a strong desire to study and you absorb new information at amazing rate. + Your magic is very strong, and you can make new spells at ease. + You want to do everything on schedule and in time. - You have a deep need for being appreciated, otherwise you become depressed. Rainbow Dash When transformed... + You have a very high self esteem. + You learn how to fly quickly, and you fly very fast. + You are very loyal. - If you lose at anything, you become depressed. Fluttershy When transformed... + You are very kind to every living being. + You are good with animals. + You are feeling great and relaxed when everything is ok. - You are very shy. Pinkie Pie When transformed... + You are in a very good mood. + Making new friends is a piece of cake. + You get that weird powers. - If you are alone for a long period of time, you become very sad. Rarity When transformed... + You are VERY ladylike, and you have a good taste in fashion. + You have great manual talent, that is, you can be precise using your horn. + Altrough you are less powerful than Twilight, you still possess above average magic. - You really like to feel comfortable, like a lady, and that can be a problem sometimes. Applejack When transformed... + You are very honest. + You possess great strenght in your hooves, and great stamina. + You are very hard working. - When someone challenges you, you may be angry. Now that you've chosen your transformation, let's upgrade it a little! I give you 100 points, and how you will use them is up to you. You don't have to use all of them. MAXIMUM TRANSFORMATION TIME IN A DAY - 6 HOURS - 25 POINTS MAXIMUM TRANSFORMATION TIME IN A DAY - 12 HOURS - 50 POINTS MAXIMUM TRANSFORMATION TIME IN A DAY - 24 HOURS - 100 POINTS THIRD FORM - ANTHRO - 50 POINTS THIRD FORM - EQUESTRIA GIRL - 25 POINTS ORIGINAL MEMORIES OF YOUR PONY (You have both your memories and that of your pony) - 50 POINTS NO PERSONALITY CHANGE WHEN TRANSFORMED (This can be turned off and on) - 25 POINTS REMOVE WEAKNESSES - 25 POINTS PORTAL TO EQUESTRIA (Real pony will still be there, you will be it's clone when transformed) - 75 POINTS THIRD FORM - ALICORN (For 10 minutes in a day, you can turn into Celestia, Luna, or Cadence. This will not affect your normal transformation time, it's separate) - 75 POINTS So, that's it. As for me, I would choose Twilight (Though Rarity is also a good choice, sometimes I feel like her...) and my points would be spend on 12 Hour transformation time and Original memories of Twilight. That way, I would be good at using magic. What about you? What do you choose, and how will you use your form?
  13. So which pony the reader will transform into in your story?
  14. But we will be able to create conscious beings once we understand how brain works, and that's a matter of 10-20 years. If Equestria isn't real, we will make it real.
  15. RULES: 1. SFW, but you may VERY lightly describe changes to anatomy. (''You now have mare/stallion parts'' is ok) 2. Describe what is happening to the reader, not to you. 3. Personality change must occur. 4. Reader keeps his old memories, but doesn't gain the memories of a pony he transforms into. 5. OCs and Canon allowed, including royalty. 6. Your story must be heartwarming and wish-fulfilling. 7. Base scenario is that your reader always wanted to be the pony you are transforming him into, how will you do it is your own decision. Magic, potions, science - It's up to you. 8. Reader is brought to Equestria before his transformation, and if he stays, his family is also brought there to avoid separation. It's a heartwarming fanfic after all! 9. It doesn't have to be long - one post is enough. 10. As for what happens to the pony reader turns into - nothing, because Equestria didn't exist before reader is brought there. This is so that no one will be forced to possess or kill a sentient being. 11. Ponies in Equestria know who reader really is, but they accept his new identity and gain a new friend. Anon With a Lavender Desire Ever since you watched MLP:FIM for the first time, your biggest dream was hidden in your heart. Outside, you were a teenager, perhaps a little more intelligent than average one. You were always interested in many things, but you had problems with your self esteem. Deep inside you knew that you were a powerful and magical being. You knew it. You just had to accept it. Beautiful eyes. Wondeful mane. Powerful horn. And that voice... Twilight Sparkle was always the being you wanted to be. In fact, every time someone compared you to her, you felt good. You wanted to be her, to have her body and personality. To have her friends. To have a close mother-child like relationship with Princess Celestia. To see yourself in a mirror, as a new, powerful, introverted, intelligent bookworm. But most importantly, to be happy. To have a smile on your muzzle. To have that high self esteem you deserve. You are Twilight Sparkle. Maybe not outside yet, but inside, you are a powerful unicorn. *ZAP!* A small bottle appeared on your desk. It was filled with some kid of a white liquid. There was a message on label, written for you! ''Nothing means more to me than the well-being of all my subjects. If you want to be my faithful student, Anon, simply drink this potion. I will take care of everything else. -Princess Celestia.'' The potion had a nice milky taste, and as soon as the last drop was in your stomach, you felt a change: You became more introverted than you were before. You wanted to study. Your self esteem increased and you felt that you are satisfied with your vast knowledge, but you wanted more. You wanted to be appreciated by Princess Celestia. This was he first part of your desire. Your hair changed color to dark blue with pink streak, and lenghtened. It had a smell of lavender. Your skin changed it's color to lavender, and a gentle hair covered your entire body. It was so soft...This was the second part of your dream. Your arms and legs changed into hooves. You knew that you would be a unicorn, so that wasn't so bad. Besides, now you could run faster! This was your third part of your wish. Your male parts changed into mare parts. You were happy, because one of the perks of being Twilight was that you would finally be a female, and that was your desire for a long time. Also, a new tail shout out from your behind. It was beautiul. Your eyes, ears, nose, mouth, and shape of head, were changed to that of Twilight. Your memories remained, but you didn't gain any new ones - which is good, you will get to learn all kinds of cool magic! Finally, a horn grew on your forehead. Instantly, a mirror appeared. You saw the most beautiful sight in your life: You, as Twilight Sparkle. The best pony ever. And then, you were hugged by Princess Celestia. She said, ''I did this to make you happy. This is my gift for you. In a minute, you new friends will arrive. And don't worry, nothing happened to real Twilight because YOU are the real Twilight. She didn't exist until now.'' It was a day filled with happiness. Princess Celestia brought your family to Equestria so that you didn't have to leave this paradise. Your life was complete and learning magic was wonderful. You are Twilight Sparkle. You are who you always wanted to be. So, I invite you to write your own fic! Have fun! Bumping because no one replied and it took me long to make this thread.
  16. Oh dear, he we go again with this ''It will never be real'' speech. People, I know that Equestria will be real in 26 years. http://mlpforums.com/topic/64731-real-equestria-in-2039/ I hope that I made your day a little better, and see you in Equestria in 25 years. I will have the body and personality of Twilight btw.
  17. 1. What does it feel like to be a pony? 2. How realistic the whole experience is when compared to real life? 3. Your best experience, and why?
  18. So you want to be Celestia? I would want to try this. I wonder what it feels like to wear her regalia. They must be heavy.
  19. I discourage you from visiting Hypnoponies forum. They banned me because I, as they put it, ''Ruined their sanctuary''. One of their admins actually said that I should ban evade and lie about my identity, and then maybe they will let me back. I refused and hypnosis is not for me.
  20. Me too. Every time anyone says that I'm like Twilight, I feels so special...I also want to be her because I want to be a mare.
  21. Hmm, you know, Now I think that I would like to try being Twilight while having her personality. I would like to know what it feels like to be her.
  22. Pony hypnosis? Tried that but it didn't work. I was even on Hypnoponies forum where I was banned. But I will be Twilight in about 25 years thanks to this: http://mlpforums.com/topic/64731-real-equestria-in-2039/ A thread I made some months ago. Knowing that someday I will be Twilight is making me really happy.
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