Pencil Hoof

Working on a giant sketch sheet for all the OCs in the thread btw, but I might need a while since it's almost the end of the semester so teachers are piling work on like... I dunno

I found this guy recently, and can definitely vouch for him. Great artist, and great videos. I would subscribe to him again if I could. Not really, I don't like him THAT much, but hey, I had to say something to get 100 characters

Third time writing this, so sorry if I sound short or critical -_- Anyway, like I said. The first thing is, his right shoulder is slanted. If you want to fix that, then just make the lines more horizontal and less diagonal. Keeping on the subject of shoulders/arms, his right arm could benefit from being brought forward a bit. Right now, as it goes from the shoulder toward the hand, it slants towards the body. That makes it look like he's just slightly pull his arm backwards, which, if you try it, is really quite uncomfortable, and unnatural . I also noticed that the bottom "half" of his body (below the waist) is too short. If you visualize, or better yet, sketch legs that fit in that robe, you'll see it's not quite right... I think... The last thing I really noticed was his robe is a little weird on his bottom left (the right side of the drawing). The robe is slanted outward, but it doesn't look like there's any reason it should be. If it's supposed to be his leg making the robe slant, then it's easier to actually draw the leg, then just erase it's inside. However, if it IS supposed to be his leg, then that's also a bit unnatural. If it's suppsed to be the wind, then you should try drawing a consistently angled line from the belt to the end of the robe. Then you can try drawing some dramatic folds in there (the whole drawing would look cooler with folds of some sort). I would tell you how to do that if I was very good with folds myself Anyway, hope this helps. P.S., sorry for any bad spelling, but I'm typing on my Wii U, and me + touchscreen keyboards = BLECH. P.P.S., if you don't understand anything I said (whether it's because of previously stated reasons for bad spelling, or just bad explanations on my part (or even just something in the picture that looks wrong to you that you want a second opinion on), just ask.

LOL that's what I said (minus the hair thing XD) Oh well, great minds think alike Or in this case mediocre minds (mine) think like great minds (yours)

The problem with the left side of the face is that the eye is too big. Try pushing the top of the eye down a little. Also, because the eye doesn't follow the same curve as the face it looks like it's bulging out, so I think if you make the edge of the eye the same curve as the edge of the face it should fix that problem. Hopefully that helps :S Oh also, you might try making the top of her snout more flat. Like, make it more like a right angle I admittedly don't know much about this, but wouldn't that sort of thing be more of a personal preference than a set list of good vs. bad?

I'm sure you already have enough suggestions to keep you until... who knows when, but I'm still gonna have to go with Keypassion on this one. My brother and I have read the majority of these books and series between us, and the Inheritance cycle is still both of our favourites.It's especially good if you enjoy mind rape. My family has hundreds and hundreds of books in our house, and i can tell you that my brother and I treat the Inheritance cycle with the most care by far. Even better than the Harry Potter series. It's like they're our children :3 I would say more, but nothing I do can describe the Inheritance cycle And if you've seen the movie Eragon (first book in the series) for the love of all things sacred, do NOT use to judge the series. That movie is blasphemy upon Christopher Paolini's work. Blasphemy I tell you. *in a menacing whisper* Blasphemy...

Dang, that's a good way to make an entry The mane thing worked well, It looks ok to me (Y) Wow this thread has a lot of awesome art *slightly intimidated*

I hope to be able to draw a bunch of these OCs over Christmas break, since I'm busy at the moment I really want to, and have been wanting to for a while now, but we'll have to see