Thank you very much! That was only and introduction. I hope to make this a continuously updating story using comic book-style pages. I already have the basic plotline for chapter 1 layed out. This is what i do for every story, lay the whole thing out, and begin writing online. Only...most of them dont get to the end of chapter 1... probably lack of motivation from others. Im very community driven. Of course, maybe my brony palls that introduced me can keep me going.