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  1. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    The doctor, despite being described as completely insane seemed completely out of it. He pulled out a clip board from under the table, "Lets see, your name is Night Sky correct?" his tone of voice gave the impression that he had done this quite a few times before.
  2. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Sitting behind a plain metal desk sat a red pegasus with a graying black mane and short beard. A tiny pair of glasses sat on his nose as he was looking over a stack of papers, "If Test Tube follows through with this the pegasus device may no longer be necessary" he muttered to himself before noticing the visitor. "Ah, your the new mule Dash brought up" he looked Night over with is dark eyes, "take a seat"
  3. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    The game goes under two different names
  4. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    There is something similar to this in the Sonic comic book series. The planet Mobius is a post apocalyptic Earth and all the creatures were created from a new evolution cycle out of the primordial soup that was left over. I can believe something like this happened on Equus and perhaps ponies rose out of the primordial soup and became the next dominant race. If there was an episode that showcased some ruined city I would be ok with it, considering I love post apocalyptic Earth stories. Also Lyra would be pleased with this.
  5. DoubleRainbow_Dash

    What if I told you a secret.....

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    2. yeet

      yeet

      What is it?

    3. DoubleRainbow_Dash

      DoubleRainbow_Dash

      GRASS IS GREEN!!!!!!!!!

    4. Moved to Elsewhere

      Moved to Elsewhere

      ah such a great secret

  6. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    What, you guys got to 100 pages without me?! That makes me sad.....
  7. DoubleRainbow_Dash

    I'm now a beautiful butterfly

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    2. DoubleRainbow_Dash

      DoubleRainbow_Dash

      Oh :P I'm not to familiar with that show I'm afraid

    3. yeet

      yeet

      Okay

    4. Sugar Pea

      Sugar Pea

      Fly awaaaay! :D Think happy thoughts!

  8. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    What is this life thing you speak of?
  9. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    "Well here it is, the Doc's office" Inkwell stopped at a unmarked door. He leaned in close to Night's ear , "Some say he's......CRAZY" He began laughing hysterically. "Oh will you shut up, that was not funny" the other voice yelled at him. "Listen, the other guy is right about the doctor, he's a bit mad, madder than the rest of us and that's saying a lot. Just be carful but do exactly as he says" the more rational side of Inkwell warned him
  10. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    As the two assended a flight of stairs, the hall around them gave way to a wide corridor made out of industrial cloud panels. The flickering lights cast long shadows around them, "Doctor Atmosphere will be so glad to have a new pony on staff, so many losses recently. It's left the facility understaffed and we've all been scurrying around like ants in a maze in order to keep the place up" Inkwell laughed to himself for no apparent reason.
  11. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Inkwell hummed a short turn to himself, unaware of the mess of pipes and wires that surrounded them. " that pipe is filled with toxic gas" he pointed with a hoof to one of the larger pipes and putting to the voice a tour guide would use. "We flood the main chamber with it to pacify the failures" He then sighed suddenly, " Don't mind him, he's an absolute lunatic. I would recommend keeping quiet till we reach the doctor, Inkwell will shut up if you don't respond to him"
  12. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    " We're in the pipe system below the Pegasus Device, it's a great system that some insane pony put together." He patted a pipe, it shook violently. "Well I think I have to take you to Doctor Atmosphere, Ms. Dash is WAY too busy to meet with you now." "Ya, probably preoccupied with killing-" "Ah-ah-ah, you'll spoil the surprise" Inkwell interrupted his other persona
  13. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    "I'm Inkwell, I was working at the factory because writing story's didn't pay the bills but I Did my job so well that I was promoted too. It's been fun working here, everyone is SO crazy" his face contorted again, Inkwells voice seemed to drop an octave. "I'm also Inkwell, the idiot I once was should have left the factory before he had the chance, and now I'm stuck in this hell hole till I inevitably get killed be something up here" "Don't be such a downer" Inkwell's other personality came back
  14. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Ya you have no idea how much effort I put into it. Next chapter I will try to be even better and focus on some new aspect of Dash and Scootaloo's relationship
  15. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    "We're in the weather factory of course" "Just call it what it is, a slaughterhouse" the other voice interjected "Go away, I'm talking to the newbie. Anyhoo, we are on the tippy top floor, only the cool ponies get to come up here." A pipe containing blue liquid burst behind them, "Ugh, that always happens. Don't worry, some pony else will take care of it"
  16. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    "Oh that's no good, already a minute in and the mental breakdown has already happened." Looking up Sky could see a red stallion with a green mane and a goofy grin staring down at him. The pony's face contorted violently, " What are you talking about, you snapped before you even got in the elevator you twit" Another spasm crossed his face, " Oh don't listen to him, he's got no idea what he's talking about"
  17. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    "How am I supposed to know, I only do as I'm told. What goes on up there is none of my business." He laughed, pressing the button, "See ya later" he said sarcastically as the doors closed in Sky's face. The elevator sprung to life and began rattling dangerously as it began to rise
  18. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    "Congratulations, you've been chosen to work in the upper factory, kiss your life goodbye" Walking over to the wall he pressed a button and a panel in the wall slid open, revealing a plain elevator. "Get on up there," he pointed to it with a hoof, "Ms. Dash can get very angry when she's kept waiting"
  19. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    The supervisor looked them over, "It looks like we've got a bunch of pansies in this lot, are you all not willing to make Cloudsdale proud with your service?" The corundum remained silent, his eyes locked right on Night, "You there, the black one, come here " he ordered
  20. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Ok, will do
  21. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    It began like a normal day, check in, get to your station and work until Celestia's sun goes down. Night Sky and the other workers slaved over the giant spectra mixing vats until a large, brown pegasus, the mixing floor supervisor, came in holding a sheet of paper. "Attention employees!" He shouted, "today is your lucky day. As it so happens there has been another casualty in the upper factory and Ms. Dash has sent me a letter about finding a replacement" There was a awkward silence, "Well?" The supervisor looked around, "Any pony gonna volunteer, other wise I'll drag one of your sorry asses up there myself"
  22. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Ok I'll take a look
  23. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Nothing else I don't think. We can start whenever you are ready
  24. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Ok then We could even PM is that's fine with you
  25. DoubleRainbow_Dash
    Whichever one is more convenient for you. One question, wasn't the factory shut down at the end of the story?
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