I would really like an honest rating on my OC, like anything. I most appreciate constructive critic that helps me to actually improve but you may throw in anything you'd like to, things you like or simply things you don't like without reason or tips to improve. Feel free to say anything bearing in mind not to be insulting, not for my sake, but for the mods
I am aware that the description is kind of sloppy sometimes and am open for any suggestions concerning this. Since this is my first OC, and to be frank I didn't put too much work into it as of now, so I have no idea what to expect or look out for.
Link to the OC: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/nightrain-r8785
Best regards
Velcorn