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  1. Dawn Darkness

    This spoiler shows the titles of the future tournament in my Equestrian Dragon story on Fantiction.

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    Preparing for a Tournament

    Opening Ceremony of the Tournament

    Minotaur vs. Dragon

    Zebra vs. Dragon

    Two Dragons, Two Evolutions

    Ultimate Virin vs. Alpha Garble, Battle of the Century                                                                                         

  2. Dawn Darkness

    *gives in a laugh* A friend of mine has posted a chapter that made me laugh in my mind uncontrollable near the end of it. That was kinda hilarious in my opinion.

  3. Dawn Darkness

    Going to watch the original version of the card game Bakugan Battle Brawlers, mostly so I can learn Japanese better. You think I should?

  4. Dawn Darkness

    Just got back from the Chinese restaurant with a satisfied stomach. Man, it felt good to have Chinese food again for over a month.

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    2. Messy Mane

      Messy Mane

      goddamn! I don't have to write that much,probably since i'm in high school

    3. Dawn Darkness

      Dawn Darkness

      Well, guess you're lucky then. It takes Hell out of me, probably since it's something I write for my very own plot, and a rather dark one. Writing something like that can take a lot out of you.

    4. Messy Mane

      Messy Mane

      if only I could imagine *sigh*

      anyways have a nice morning/day/afternoon/night!

  5. Dawn Darkness

    I am right now at round two of my character, Virin, and Garble's duel of my trial chapter. It sure is going to be a long fight between those two.

  6. Dawn Darkness

    My third original character sure is overpowered, but do you think I made it too overpowered?

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    2. Dawn Darkness

      Dawn Darkness

      @Snowflake Frostflame

      Well, what I'm referring to with the Elements of Harmony, is that they're connected to the main plot: the Infinity Diamond and the Darkness Orb. Those are what the plot point in my story is. If you thought it was the Crystal Heart, then no, but you were rather close.

    3. Johnny1226

      Johnny1226

      The character does look very overpowered from a certain standpoint since it seems he can use virtually all known abilities he would be somewhere around discords level of course that can be solved by putting limiters on his power perhaps that he must change into certain forms to use his abilities or can only be at full power for certain periods of time 

    4. Dawn Darkness

      Dawn Darkness

      @Johnny1226 While I'm thankful for your thoughts, I can say this: the amount of power he'll use will be revealed at the very last chapter of the story, The Last Battle, Part II. And, for the forms he's using his powers in, he'll only use them when he is shape-shifting to his dragon form in every battle he fights. 

  7. Dawn Darkness

    Ancestors. My trial chapter sure is going to be long. I mean, 10,000+ words? That is how long it is right now. Help me!

  8. Dawn Darkness

    My Pokémon Legend of Spyro fan fiction is going to be a heck of a long story. Curious to know what I'm talking about? Well, here. Try and check out my songfic for its theme songs.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11604434/1/Pokémon-Legend-of-Spyro-Theme-Songs-From-Beginning-to-Present

     

  9. Dawn Darkness
    As the plot of the story continues to go on, the darker it gets as well. When it's time for me to write the movies down, what are your thoughts of my idea of having chaotic dragons as the main antagonists in the sequels, after Demon Sunset in the first film? I've planned of doing something like this, let's say, after season three, four, and five in the story. The protagonist, Virin, battles against them will be the most destructive ones the world has ever seen - at least in the city where Canterlot High is. The dragons, calling themselves "Chaos Beings", has been sent on an order from their creator to destroy the last World Protector, which turns out to be the eight/nineteen year old human/dragon from Equestria, who has been arrived alongside the new Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle.
  10. Dawn Darkness

    Whew, my trial chapter sure is one heck of a long one. 8,252 words. That sure is long, right?

  11. Dawn Darkness

    From a poll on my Fanfiction profile that describes Virin's hardest fights (now, and future battles):

    Garble (season two)

    Azam, Ogyn, and Ranger (season two)

    Queen Chrysalis (season two finale)

    Demon Sunset (Equestria Girls)

    Garble (season four)

    Lord Tirek

    Xeizan (Rainbow Rocks, a Chaos Being; created by Virin's future equal opponent)

    Ranger (season five's two parter opening)

    Azam (season five finale)

    Brandrun (Friendship Games, another Chaos Being; created by Virin's future equal opponent)

    Garble (season six, tournament brawl, now has abilities like Virin, but opposite ones)

    Kelbas (Legend of Everfree, a third Chaos Being; created by Virin's future equal opponent)

    Tyrannosaurus Rex (season six' first half continuation)

    Silent Myndir (an "Ultimate Being" just like Virin at that point, season six' second half continuation finale)

    (Who's your pick, and what will be your favourite fight in a MLP fan fiction?)

  12. Dawn Darkness

    Solar, do you think I made my third original character a little too overpowered? You can check his blog post on my profile, if you want.

  13. Dawn Darkness

    Just edited a few things on my Equestrian Dragon protagonist's blog. In my eyes, I think I'd made him a little too overpowered for a regular original character to be. I mean, come on, an "Infinity" diamond on his chest, along with having all the abilities he can use, and having superhuman strength, with no limit? That's gotta be waaay too strong for the rest fanmade characters to compete against, even for Alicorn original characters.

  14. Dawn Darkness

    Question: In season six of my Equestrian Dragon: Moon Light, do you want to see a tournament in the first or second half of the continuation of it, or just in the middle of the season after my version of Friendship Games? The tournament will be in a single chapter, not feeling about splitting it.

  15. Dawn Darkness

    For my character, Virin, do you think that a diamond on his chest in the last chapter would make some sense to his very own character? He also has a scar on his left eye, to point out.

    1. ChikaChan

      ChikaChan

      That think that sounds alright there >.>

  16. Dawn Darkness
    Well, if you say "recent", then I would say Pokémon Moon on the 3DS more than a month ago, not counting the post game.
  17. Dawn Darkness

    What do you think the ponies will react by seeing a gigantic Tyrannosaurus Rex in their world? 

    1. GrimGrimoire

      GrimGrimoire

      Well they have gigantic Hydras, so I don't think they would be too concerned unless it was on their doorstep.

    2. Dawn Darkness

      Dawn Darkness

      Along with a dark character just beside it?

    3. GrimGrimoire

      GrimGrimoire

      They also have Ursa Majors and Minors... so I think they can handle it. Ursa Majors are large enough to eat a handful of T-Rexs after all. With or with any outside assistance. Then you cannot forget about the dragons.. Torch can't be the only one who gets that big.

  18. Dawn Darkness
    I've thought of bringing an old, favourite childhood Tyrannosaurus Rex antagonist from one of my favourite series, Land Before Time, as a main enemy, second to Dark Virin, in season six of my Equestrian Dragon fanfiction story. The plot point of it - a bit spoilers - will be centered on the T. Rex and the separated darkness in Moon/Virin as it continues after the season finale, To Where and Back Again, in my version. Though, I won't be making the T. Rex too scary compared to any other dark enemies in the MLP fandom, not to scare young readers, of course. What do you think of my idea?
  19. Dawn Darkness

    Song choice when reading my character, Moon/Virin: Within Temptation's "See Who I am". Don't know why, I just felt that it suits him. It's so everypony can see who he is, a protector of the world.

    I also thought of having a protagonist to be more responsible with saving the world thing. I know, the Mane Seven and Spike are the main heroes, but what if a royal joined in with them? 

  20. Dawn Darkness
    Well, I can say that this had been one of my best chapters I've written, in comparison to my other stories, on Fanfiction. Link to the exciting chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12296324/13/The-Equestrian-Dragon-Moon-Light It had been edited by me, since I hadn't been able to find an editor on Fanfiction, so I guess you could say I'm looking for someone, or somepony, to help me with other chapters of the story. Though, I suggest that you read the prologue and chapter one in order find out what happened to his real/birth parents, to not get confused who they were, as they've already died by the time of this chapter.
  21. Dawn Darkness
    Well, I have watched a few cartoons, but here's some of my favourites: Adventure Time Samurai Jack Star Wars: Clone Wars (hadn't been able to watch it on its original air, so I saw it on Youtube) American Dragon: Jake Long Kim Possible Lilo & Stitch And, of course, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is on the list.
  22. Dawn Darkness
    Well, I have many fears, like clowns (yeah, I'm scared of clowns, deal with it), crowds (mostly big ones), blood (though not in fiction, only real life and more in horror fictions), deaths, ghosts, dying (I mean, I have been near death multiple times. So yeah, I'm paranoid with dying). But, my biggest is water, mostly the bigger ocean.
  23. Dawn Darkness
    Well, so this is how I look like. Anyone who remember the hat I have on from?
  24. Dawn Darkness

    I looked through google, and I found something that had stunned me for a second.

    https://fimfetch.net/story/1012296324/the-equestrian-dragon-moon-light

    Who would've thought that my story would be on that site, huh?

  25. Dawn Darkness

    Wrote another chapter of my "Equestrian Dragon" story on Fanfiction. I can give you guys the link to it, if you want to give it a read.

    The chapter I wrote is a bit dark, but hey, that's also how some stories has to be, right?

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