I'm going through some of the kinks right now, The next part that I'll upload(when my newly hired Grammar Nazi, my Niece) Goes through it and fixes the mistakes. Also there are a bit of Plot holes and I will have to cover them. There is probably a lot of holes due to the fact I wrote it at 1:00 am one night.
I'm also trying to think ahead a bit to make sure the story has continuity.