Generosity, How You've Failed me (WIP)

[Foxx 258]

So, as you probably(don't) know, I am very impatient when it comes to art. I often rush through, missing out on chances to add little details, easter eggs and whatnot. So, as a test of my patience, I sketched up a plan for a rather tedious artwork that would require my full attention and dedication. So, here is a work in progress! Critiques and opinions are wanted and greatly appreciated.  I'm pretty proud of the hair and shading as of now, so let's hope that doesn't change!

 

 

 

With Sketch

 

 

 

 

Sans sketch

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited June 15, 2014 by Foxx

[ghostfacekiller39 23,879]

What's the theme of the piece? Is it to do with her appearance in "Rarity Takes Manehattan," or is it something completely different?

[Pinkamena-Pills 6,840]

I like what i see so far,especially the yellow pony behind who i presume to be Rarity. Keep it up 

[wewi567etyrerag 82]

wow it looks awesome so far i hope to get to see it when its done 

 

keep up the good work 

[True Rarity 1,240]

Beautiful; it features the best pony and it's wonderfully drawn. I can see that it's not finished yet, so I'm excited to see the rest.

[Foxx 258]

What's the theme of the piece? Is it to do with her appearance in "Rarity Takes Manehattan," or is it something completely different?

Yep, it's based on Rarity takes Manehattan. 

[Applejohn 108]

I saw the art piece you made for dj spacer and i was amazed, specially the mane, it looks so real you are an awesome artist. I'm looking forward to see more of you