Assertion [FDS]

[Scooblee 121]

 

Thought I'd post this here for some feedback. I started this not too long after I made my Boooring! cover, and since the Assertive-ness was still fresh on my mind, I figured I'd try to create an original in the style of Assertive Fluttershy. Hopefully, it lives up to the name!

 

Please, tell me what you think of it!

[Strigidae 12]

Hey that's really good! If I ain't wrong and IIRC I do believe this was featured in EQD on the same day as one of my songs...I knew I'd heard this somewhere before good job

[Scooblee 121]

Thanks! And yeah, you're right, both were featured on MotD 447. I thought I had seen that owl before!

(I thought I was never gonna get a response on this, btw, so thanks for proving me wrong.) (It's really disheartening to work on something and ask for criticism only for it to be ignored.)

[RhythmicBrony 19]

really digging the retro style you put to it, very pleasing to the ear and a great beat!

[Strigidae 12]

((It's really disheartening to work on something and ask for criticism only for it to be ignored.)

I know exactly how you feel, when you work incredibly hard at something and it just gets buried under >.<