Vector Time! - Rocket Punk's 2D gallery

[Rocket Punk 476]

Ahoy, whoever is reading this. It's Rocket Punk here, presenting his 2nd gallery. Why second, you should ask? Cause I'm also working on 3D pony models, and I thought it would be a good thing to separate. Here, you'll be able to see what I draw on my spare time.

 

Here's my first OC, created, like 3 hours ago. I drew him with Inkscape and coloured with Gimp. I have the honour to present you... Phoenix Sunfire! Pretty cool, huh?

 

 

Yeah, I screwed his head up, but excuse me, I'm an Inkscape newbie, so while I wanted to to a perfect stallion mouth, I just sucked. And the worst is I just realized that. But I think it's a good beginning. I'll wait to better myself to draw 2 more OCs I imagined: Rocket Punk (yeah, that's me), and Blitzkrieg Punk, his brother.

 

Don't forget to leave a comment as I could improve my drawing skills 

[WriterOnTheRun 25]

That is really good! All I suggest is that you make the iris(s) a little smaller and make the eye white, so it looks better. When I say "make the eye white" I mean to make the white part of your eyes, actually white.

Also, move up the cutie mark a bit. It's ok if the wings cover a bit of it.

[DashYoshi 9,565]

This vector is pretty nice! Keep practicing!

 

I have a few suggestions:

~ The cutie mark should be a little higher, between the tail and wings.

~ The legs should be a little more curved.

~ The head needs a little fixing in the positioning of the eyes and ears.

 

But overall, it's really nice.

[Rocket Punk 476]

Thanks guys! Also, as I said, it's my very first vector, I just did txo others before, but they were easier than Phoenix. I think I should've made the wings a little shorter, as I could add the cutie mark at the right place, like you said, DashYoshi. I'll update my post when I have enough time to edit the vector. And once again, thanks a lot.

[ConcorDisparate 385]

Hey! Nice job . Remember to use smooth nodes (ctrl + click on a node) so your lines look smoothier.

Meh actually, it depends if you want your ponies to look like the ones in the show or not - I don't really know if you decided to use thin lines or if you didn't know how to get bigger ones-.

 

Also, it would be better overall to learn how to color without using GIMP, otherwise, there is no point in using inkscape when you can use the GIMP path tool.

[Rocket Punk 476]

Thanks for help, I tried to keep that in mind for my OC, Rocket Punk. Here it is.

 

 

Woops, apparently I forgot to add the heart on his Cutie Mark... Also, I wanted to turn the handbang mode on, as a good punk, but I missed that, I think I screwed the basic posture up, he's just posing like Michael Jackson  . What do you think?

[Rocket Punk 476]

Hey there! I have finished my new OC thumbnail. And here it is. I used Inkscape for everything here, and I think I get better every time. Thanks everypony, your advices helped me a lot!