Pinkie Pie and The Quest for Missing Smiles

[Venates 10]

Hi, guys!

 

I just published a new story, same as the title above:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/251681/pinkie-pie-and-the-quest-for-missing-smiles

 

It's my first time tackling one of the Mane 6 in such a plot-driven way. I'm a little nervous as to whether I got all of the characters right, and would love an opinion on it.

 

Additionally, The story is rife with symbolism. I'm hesitant to say too much, as I feel like doing so could spoil the ending. That said, I would love to discuss some of the images and themes to see if I did a good job in that regard as well.

 

The story right now is complete at just over 12,000 words, so it's not a crazy-long read (not compared to my other stuff, anyway). Please do let me know any thoughts you might have! Thanks!

Edited March 27, 2015 by Venates

[Happy Spark is King 331]

I give it a 10/10. Good job i loved the story however i am not much of a writer so i cant tell to what to improve on but i enjoyed the story and it did feel like the characters were correct. Brilliant work my friend

[Venates 10]

It just got featured by Royal Canterlot Library! I'm pretty excited!