ooc the dimensional war OOC(the last september sequel)

[JonasDarkmane 19,790]

 

Sinusoid had listened to Rave and Chaotic's entire conversation, somehow without being thought of as a threat, and memorizes as much as he can so that he can tell Scare. He walks away casually, remembering how, in high school, Rave thought that the world was against him only because of his family. Sinusoid had always known that it was actually mostly because of his terrible personality and constant hostility, but he is honestly surprised that Rave had still not thought about it logically. He thinks, "I can see why Fracture had hated him so much; what a moron." He gallops to the rest of the group to catch up, and says to Scare, "Rave Darkmane, a pony that you met a year ago along with Fracture, wants to and is planning to kill you, along with doing another probably evil thing, and he will meet with Chaotic tomorrow to discuss it."

 

I am going to treat this as nothing more than Sinusoid's opinion on Rave. Because he gets a lot of hate only because he is a Darkmane. 

 

Also, I think this was really poorly done, this is giving unfair advantage to the protagonist in a too easy and a bad way. So I am asking for a edit since it would be really unfair if some pony just heard everything and suddenly ran to the others explaining everything. 

[Scare Effect 312]

@@Sinusoid,  i agree with Jonas this right here will make the RP unfair and kinda boring too if the heroes know Rave's plan early. so please edit it.

[Sinusoid 37]

Darn.

I spent a half hour on that post, and sound magic is that character's specialty.

I will change it, but I feel bad now.

[Scare Effect 312]

Hey don't feel bad

[Sinusoid 37]

Hardly anything hurts my feelings like being called out for poor writing by people whose opinions I respect.

[JonasDarkmane 19,790]

Hardly anything hurts my feelings like being called out for poor writing by people whose opinions I respect.

I am sorry, but sometimes one makes bad posts. I am not calling you out. I am only asking you to fix the post. It is not you who I think is poor but the post. I don't judge people, only the actions. This action is fixable, so nothing to worry about *Hugs* 

[Scare Effect 312]

@@Sinusoid,  Thank you that is much better.

[JonasDarkmane 19,790]

I agree... except for the 'moron' part since who could ever call him that  ? JK xD. It's fine ^^

[Randimaxis 8,664]

I'm still here - just waiting 'til it seems like a good place to come in.  Don't mind me.

 

}:>

[Wicked Funky 2,956]

 

I'm still here - just waiting 'til it seems like a good place to come in.  Don't mind me.

 

}:>

Same here .3.

[Scare Effect 312]

@@Randimaxis,

sorry there hasn't been any chances for your characters to appear. But i will have Chaotic visit Dax in an up coming post

@,

I think since the guard ponies are at the crime scene your character could be there too considering your character is a part of the guard right?

[Randimaxis 8,664]

... because SOMEPONY has to be the comic relief, right?

 

*chuckle*

[Yoshikupo 302]

I don't think that somepony could go up to two others and knock them out with powder in the morning at a café while ponies are working in it without somepony calling the cops, or is that where this is going?  

[Scare Effect 312]

I didn't say no one called the cops i did it to progress the story if it does't sit right i can change it

[Yoshikupo 302]

nah I just wanted to point that out

[Scare Effect 312]

Don't worry the guards are gonna be called

for those who haven't figured it out Fear is back but is different

@, your character is the leader of the manehatten guard

[Scare Effect 312]

magic types first post.

[JonasDarkmane 19,790]

 

 

 

 

Dark-only Rave uses this, it is mostly offensive with little defensive capabilities but does include shields, and what

ever attacks and transformations jonasdarkmane can think of. only those who are truly evil can use this effectively.

 

 

Please define "truly evil". Because that is really subjective. If you really need Rave to be some psychopathic monster for his magic to work for once, then I will have to make Blackforest, who is what you probably define as "truly evil", take over Rave's body (or at least on some occasions when fighting). 

[Scare Effect 312]

@@JonasDarkmane,  I edited it to include a loop hole i think fits but if you don't like it please pm me what i should put there

@@JonasDarkmane, @@Yoshikupo, @@Randimaxis,

and any one else i didn't get. I have made a major mistake with the main villian i got her species wrong she was suppose to be an alicorn, but i kept calling her a unicorn. I feel kinda stupid for that and wanted to let you know she is an alicorn not a unicorn.

[JonasDarkmane 19,790]

@@JonasDarkmane,  I edited it to include a loop hole i think fits but if you don't like it please pm me what i should put there

@@JonasDarkmane, @@Yoshikupo, @@Randimaxis,

and any one else i didn't get. I have made a major mistake with the main villian i got her species wrong she was suppose to be an alicorn, but i kept calling her a unicorn. I feel kinda stupid for that and wanted to let you know she is an alicorn not a unicorn.

Alrighty then. No harm done 

[Randimaxis 8,664]

*chuckle* I'm not gonna blame you for that - mistakes happen.  

[Scare Effect 312]

here is her Character page.https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dimension-spinner-r8583

[JonasDarkmane 19,790]

Oh, so it was the main boss that I encountered? I thought it was just one of the main villain's generals or something...... wow.... XD

[Scare Effect 312]

that is another reason i had chaotic appear so could save Spinner for last.

[Sinusoid 37]

I'm back, and too many things happened while I was gone.

I am now very confused, even after reading everything. Could someone please explain what's happening, and where every character is?

Yoshikupo, thank you for posting for me.