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Rainbowdash_82

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  It looks pretty decent, but you could do a bit better:

 

  • Try to find pictures of characters with matching styles. Rarity has pronounced lines, making her look more sharp while Fluttershy has soft lines, making her look much softer. The difference is a bit jarring.
  • Centering the lines with the cutie marks would make it look much more pleasing as well. Also adding some anti-ailasing to it would make it look much smoother.

  Just my 2 cents.

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Hi ,

 

As this thread is showcasing Fan Art made by you, I have moved it to Fan Art.

 

 

Also, this actually looks pretty good, but I'd suggest finding better renders where the edges aren't as rough. Rarity and the center divider both look really edgy. Fluttershy's quality is the quality you should aim for.

 

I do like the composition though, and the blurred background is an excellent effect that adds depth. I do suggest playing around with the sizes of your renders though; it might look better if you make them larger.

 

Keep practicing! You have a lot of potential. :)

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