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"Well, knowing the dork patrol, they'll probably be doing dorky things with it. They'll probably find a way to make sand sound even more boring than it already is." Amber groaned. Returning the sand would probably lead to yet another situation where all the scientist ponies gather round sorting everything out, with the two of them off to the side doing bugger all. "I guess we were at least useful for once. Although I doubt we'll be needed once all the science-y stuff is thrown back into the mix. Yay for being background ponies." She muttered a curse under her breath, returning to her task with even less enthusiasm than before.

 

"Pfft, right?" Solar muttered, rolling her eyes in annoyance, "Dumb science, thinks it's so smart."

 

 

The security stallion standing a few meters away from Amber, "ha you should consider yourself lucky no one asked me anything Sapphire just gives orders." He looked back out to the distance, still speaking. "Amber you'll do something good just wait and see, at least ponies speak to you." He looked back off to the distance.

 

She jumped as she noticed the security pony standing right next to them. "Holy Tartarus, where did you come from?!"

She then blinked and tilted her head. "You guys never speak up, besides I always had this feeling you would just repeat stuff over and over if I tried talking to you."

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The security stallion standing a few meters away from Amber, "ha you should consider yourself lucky no one asked me anything Sapphire just gives orders." He looked back out to the distance, still speaking. "Amber you'll do something good just wait and see, at least ponies speak to you." He looked back off to the distance.

 

Amber scowled at the pony rudely interrupting her lament. But she couldn't fault his logic. A sigh escaped her and she placed the last few vials into her saddlebags, shuffling back towards Solar as the other pony left the scene. "Gee, thanks, now I just feel even worse." She muttered grimly. Amber jiggled her foreleg ever so slightly, feeling a subtle numbing pain at the nerve ends. "Meh. We should probably get back to Scarlett at some point soon. Otherwise, we are literally two mares carrying around a ton of sand for no reason. Let's just hope we actually did something right..."


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Amber scowled at the pony rudely interrupting her lament. But she couldn't fault his logic. A sigh escaped her and she placed the last few vials into her saddlebags, shuffling back towards Solar as the other pony left the scene. "Gee, thanks, now I just feel even worse." She muttered grimly. Amber jiggled her foreleg ever so slightly, feeling a subtle numbing pain at the nerve ends. "Meh. We should probably get back to Scarlett at some point soon. Otherwise, we are literally two mares carrying around a ton of sand for no reason. Let's just hope we actually did something right..."

 

Solar frowned, taken by surprise a bit at how sudden Amber had looked upset. She had also noticed her slightly twitching her foreleg, which concerned her.

"Hey, you alright?" She asked, her voice more quiet and soft, "You don't look so good. Need a drink or something?"


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"I'm fine!" She snarled. Her ears flicked back, grimacing at her own words. "I-I mean, um..." She cleared her throat, shaking her body all over. "I'm fine, thanks." She turned away, double checking her saddlebags. Aside from the few things she'd brought, it was mostly full of just the sand. Alright, okay, got the sand. Please Celestia, tell me this is the right stuff, I'm so not in the mood to be berated by Scarlett.


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Lightning raced towards the two mares, furious like never before. "Aaaaaaagggh!" He tripped and tumbled over into the sand. "OOF! Ughhh..." He looked up to see the two mares staring at him with puzzled looks. "Uhh, just in case you were wondering, I came because I heard something about wet sand. Yeah, the 'dork patrol' needs to see it, unless you're too busy making fun of me!" Lightning said with a huff.

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"I'm fine!" She snarled. Her ears flicked back, grimacing at her own words. "I-I mean, um..." She cleared her throat, shaking her body all over. "I'm fine, thanks." She turned away, double checking her saddlebags. Aside from the few things she'd brought, it was mostly full of just the sand. Alright, okay, got the sand. Please Celestia, tell me this is the right stuff, I'm so not in the mood to be berated by Scarlett.

 

Solar actually flinched at Amber's snapping, ears lowered. This wasn't like her friend at all!

"You sure?" She asked, slowly and carefully, "I can see if I can--"

 

 

Lightning raced towards the two mares, furious like never before. "Aaaaaaagggh!" He tripped and tumbled over into the sand. "OOF! Ughhh..." He looked up to see the two mares staring at him with puzzled looks. "Uhh, just in case you were wondering, I came because I heard something about wet sand. Yeah, the 'dork patrol' needs to see it, unless you're too busy making fun of me!" Lightning said with a huff.

 

She was cut off by the sudden appearance of the stallion. That nerdy one from before, she realised.

 

"Oh come on," she sighed, rolling her eyes at how grumpy he was, then held out an empty hoof, "Here's a pile of jokes, try to take one."


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She was cut off by the sudden appearance of the stallion. That nerdy one from before, she realised.

 

"Oh come on," she sighed, rolling her eyes at how grumpy he was, then held out an empty hoof, "Here's a pile of jokes, try to take one."

 

"Fine. Sorry for my outburst. I just don't like being treated like *imitates teen girl voice* 'OMG, like, he's such a dork. Just, like, make fun of him and stuff.' *Stops imitating* Believe me, I've had to go through a lot of that when I was in school." As he stood up, he dusted himself off with his wings. "Anyway, I heard something about wet sand over the radio. Mind if I take a look?"

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Solar actually flinched at Amber's snapping, ears lowered. This wasn't like her friend at all!

"You sure?" She asked, slowly and carefully, "I can see if I can--"

 

 

 

She was cut off by the sudden appearance of the stallion. That nerdy one from before, she realised.

 

"Oh come on," she sighed, rolling her eyes at how grumpy he was, then held out an empty hoof, "Here's a pile of jokes, try to take one."

 

Loud, loud, loud, loud, LOUD. Too many loud noises! It felt like a hornet queen had just decided to lay her nest inside of her brain. The sand seemed to swirl and rise up around her, entombing her, imprisoning her. Sand? Sand! That's what she wanted! Sand! She sluggishly turned to the stallion who'd just arrived, the words he spoke reaching her as just whitenoise. "Wet sand? I got a LOT of that!" She chirped as she dropped her saddlebags onto the ground, their contents spilling out. "See? The not-nerds did something!" She beamed at him. Wait no...the hornets! They're moving! Get out of me! Amber swore she could taste bile on her tongue, the hornets spread throughout her body, taking control of her. Her lungs seemed to contract and relax at an abnormal rate. "UGH, STOP IT! GET OUT!" She fell to the ground, sand being thrown up into the air. She wriggled around, as if trying to scratch an itch that wasn't there, desperately scraping her side against the ground.


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"Fine. Sorry for my outburst. I just don't like being treated like *imitates teen girl voice* 'OMG, like, he's such a dork. Just, like, make fun of him and stuff.' *Stops imitating* Believe me, I've had to go through a lot of that when I was in school." As he stood up, he dusted himself off with his wings. "Anyway, I heard something about wet sand over the radio. Mind if I take a look?"

 

"Your imitation of me is very on point," Solar remarked, sarcasm practically dripping from her mouth, "Anyway, yeah, we got some wet sand, lemme just--"

 

 

Loud, loud, loud, loud, LOUD. Too many loud noises! It felt like a hornet queen had just decided to lay her nest inside of her brain. The sand seemed to swirl and rise up around her, entombing her, imprisoning her. Sand? Sand! That's what she wanted! Sand! She sluggishly turned to the stallion who'd just arrived, the words he spoke reaching her as just whitenoise. "Wet sand? I got a LOT of that!" She chirped as she dropped her saddlebags onto the ground, their contents spilling out. "See? The not-nerds did something!" She beamed at him. Wait no...the hornets! They're moving! Get out of me! Amber swore she could taste bile on her tongue, the hornets spread throughout her body, taking control of her. Her lungs seemed to contract and relax at an abnormal rate. "UGH, STOP IT! GET OUT!" She fell to the ground, sand being thrown up into the air. She wriggled around, as if trying to scratch an itch that wasn't there, desperately scraping her side against the ground.

 

She froze in total shock as Amber dropped to the sand, seeming to have some kind of fit.

 

"Amber?!" She yelped, grabbing her shoulder and shaking her gently, "Amber, what's wrong?!"

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She froze in total shock as Amber dropped to the sand, seeming to have some kind of fit.   "Amber?!" She yelped, grabbing her shoulder and shaking her gently, "Amber, what's wrong?!"

 

"I...I..." It felt like her mouth refused to comply with her wishes. Her entire strength seemed to dwindle as she used everything she had to fight against the buzzing. That incessant buzzing! She forcefully grabbed her mane with her hooves, as if trying to tug at it and tear the hornets out from their hiding place. But to no avail. "It...hurts! I can't- feel..." Every word she spoke seemed to only push the knife in further, her throat burning. "I- FEEL...it hurts so bad!" She screamed out, tears breaking through their ducts and freely flowing down her face. She could barely see. I'm going blind! Nothing but darkness! 


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Loud, loud, loud, loud, LOUD. Too many loud noises! It felt like a hornet queen had just decided to lay her nest inside of her brain. The sand seemed to swirl and rise up around her, entombing her, imprisoning her. Sand? Sand! That's what she wanted! Sand! She sluggishly turned to the stallion who'd just arrived, the words he spoke reaching her as just whitenoise. "Wet sand? I got a LOT of that!" She chirped as she dropped her saddlebags onto the ground, their contents spilling out. "See? The not-nerds did something!" She beamed at him. Wait no...the hornets! They're moving! Get out of me! Amber swore she could taste bile on her tongue, the hornets spread throughout her body, taking control of her. Her lungs seemed to contract and relax at an abnormal rate. "UGH, STOP IT! GET OUT!" She fell to the ground, sand being thrown up into the air. She wriggled around, as if trying to scratch an itch that wasn't there, desperately scraping her side against the ground.

 

She froze in total shock as Amber dropped to the sand, seeming to have some kind of fit.

 

"Amber?!" She yelped, grabbing her shoulder and shaking her gently, "Amber, what's wrong?!"

 

"WHAT THE-" Lightning was surprised at what was happening in front of him. "Oh my gosh, are you okay?" He said to Amber "Tuesday, start recording!" He said to his onboard AI. "Yes, sir. Recording..."

 

"I...I..." It felt like her mouth refused to comply with her wishes. Her entire strength seemed to dwindle as she used everything she had to fight against the buzzing. That incessant buzzing! She forcefully grabbed her mane with her hooves, as if trying to tug at it and tear the hornets out from their hiding place. But to no avail. "It...hurts! I can't- feel..." Every word she spoke seemed to only push the knife in further, her throat burning. "I- FEEL...it hurts so bad!" She screamed out, tears breaking through their ducts and freely flowing down her face. She could barely see. I'm going blind! Nothing but darkness!

 

"I think I know what's happening!" He said to Solar. "I think she's having a heat stroke! We need to get her back to the ship NOW!" "GUARD, PLEASE PICK UP THOSE VIALS AND SADDLEBAGS AND FOLLOW US! This is urgent!" He barked as he helped Solar lift Amber.

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"I...I..." It felt like her mouth refused to comply with her wishes. Her entire strength seemed to dwindle as she used everything she had to fight against the buzzing. That incessant buzzing! She forcefully grabbed her mane with her hooves, as if trying to tug at it and tear the hornets out from their hiding place. But to no avail. "It...hurts! I can't- feel..." Every word she spoke seemed to only push the knife in further, her throat burning. "I- FEEL...it hurts so bad!" She screamed out, tears breaking through their ducts and freely flowing down her face. She could barely see. I'm going blind! Nothing but darkness!

 

"Amber!" Solar cried, then began to wonder if the suit was doing something to her. She hit the deactivation button and watched as the suit unfolded off of her, then pocketed the small cube in her saddlebag before helping her up. "Easy now, easy... I'm gonna take you to Red, she'll know what to do."

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"Amber!" Solar cried, then began to wonder if the suit was doing something to her. She hit the deactivation button and watched as the suit unfolded off of her, then pocketed the small cube in her saddlebag before helping her up. "Easy now, easy... I'm gonna take you to Red, she'll know what to do."

 

It felt like Amber's thoughts were just steadily oozing out of her subconscious now, any actual words or ideas just coming out as a bunch of incoherent drivel. The feeling of her suit being removed was the worst though. To Amber, it felt like somepony was forcibly removing every inch of her coat, forcing her mouth open in a soundless scream. Her vision was bloodshot, and her nightmares were becoming real. How am I alive? How am I STILL alive? I can't breathe! I can't- I can't- She fell limp in Solar's hooves. 


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It felt like Amber's thoughts were just steadily oozing out of her subconscious now, any actual words or ideas just coming out as a bunch of incoherent drivel. The feeling of her suit being removed was the worst though. To Amber, it felt like somepony was forcibly removing every inch of her coat, forcing her mouth open in a soundless scream. Her vision was bloodshot, and her nightmares were becoming real. How am I alive? How am I STILL alive? I can't breathe! I can't- I can't- She fell limp in Solar's hooves. 

 

"Easy Amber, easy," Solar muttered, trying to calm her friend down, "You're gonna be okay, I promise."

 

With a bit of effort, she hoisted the limp pegasus onto her back and began hauling her back toward the gate. Hopefully some shade would help her relax.

 

"Red, where are you?!" She called, hoping the unicorn would respond, "We got a situation here!"

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"Easy Amber, easy," Solar muttered, trying to calm her friend down, "You're gonna be okay, I promise."

 

With a bit of effort, she hoisted the limp pegasus onto her back and began hauling her back toward the ship. Hopefully some shade would help her relax.

 

"Red, where are you?!" She called, hoping the unicorn would respond, "We got a situation here!"

 

Scarlett was just reaching the top of the first dune when she heard someone shouting, she thought it was her name. She stood completely still listening for a moment before hearing some rather familiar words. 'We got a situation here!"

 

She quickly looked to where the sound was coming from and honed in on the location. She was at the top of the dune, so the line of sight was quite clear. And then she saw Amber on Solar's back.

 

She then jumped in the air, gained some momentum and teleported down onto the slope of the dune going at quite a fast speed. She got to the pair after about 30 seconds and skidded to a stop before Solar "What happened!" before getting closer to look at Amber "This can't be good."


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Scarlett was just reaching the top of the first dune when she heard someone shouting, she thought it was her name. She stood completely still listening for a moment before hearing some rather familiar words. 'We got a situation here!"

 

She quickly looked to where the sound was coming from and honed in on the location. She was at the top of the dune, so the line of sight was quite clear. And then she saw Amber on Solar's back.

 

She then jumped in the air, gained some momentum and teleported down onto the slope of the dune going at quite a fast speed. She got to the pair after about 30 seconds and skidded to a stop before Solar "What happened!" before getting closer to look at Amber "This can't be good."

 

Solar gave out a sigh of relief as Scarlett arrived right away, skidding to a halt before her.

 

"I don't know what happened to her," she explained, looking up at her friend, "I think she had a heat stroke or something. She needs to get back on the ship right now!"


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Solar gave out a sigh of relief as Scarlett arrived right away, skidding to a halt before her.

 

"I don't know what happened to her," she explained, looking up at her friend, "I think she had a heat stroke or something. She needs to get back on the ship right now!"

 

"I have to agree with Solar. I just had Tuesday run an analysis of the video, and Amber showed the symptoms of heat stroke. We have to get her to a physically colder environment, a.k.a the ship," he said. "If we don't get her there quickly..." his voice trailed off, shuddering at the thought.

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Solar gave out a sigh of relief as Scarlett arrived right away, skidding to a halt before her.

 

"I don't know what happened to her," she explained, looking up at her friend, "I think she had a heat stroke or something. She needs to get back on the ship right now!"

 

Scarlett quickly used her magic to pull Amber off of Solar's back and onto her own. Before waiting for the obvious question from Solar she quickly interjected; "You have the Kino remote, and you're a pegasus. You need to get to the gate and dial the Destiny. Assuming you're on the main screen of the remote press the second option down to open up the gate addresses and click the one highlighted in blue. Go!"

 

She then started walking as fast as she could towards the gate. Teleporting was not an option while moving potentially harmed ponies.


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Scarlett quickly used her magic to pull Amber off of Solar's back and onto her own. Before waiting for the obvious question from Solar she quickly interjected; "You have the Kino remote, and you're a pegasus. You need to get to the gate and dial the Destiny. Assuming you're on the main screen of the remote press the second option down to open up the gate addresses and click the one highlighted in blue. Go!"

 

She then started walking as fast as she could towards the gate. Teleporting was not an option while moving potentially harmed ponies.

 

Solar nodded and took out the Kino remote out of her saddlebag. "Right, I'm on it!"

 

She sped off toward the gate, landing to a slowing stop and kicking sand up from the skidding. She did what she was told and selected the highlighted address for the Destiny. The gate activated and created a vortex.

 

"There, it's on!" She called to Scarlett, "C'mon, hurry!"

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Solar nodded and took out the Kino remote out of her saddlebag. "Right, I'm on it!"

 

She sped off toward the gate, landing to a slowing stop and kicking sand up from the skidding. She did what she was told and selected the highlighted address for the Destiny. The gate activated and created a vortex.

 

"There, it's on!" She called to Scarlett, "C'mon, hurry!"

 

Scarlett was fast approaching the gate. She wasn't sure how long Amber would last so as a last resort she levitated the pony off of her back and pulled her through the air behind her gently. She began to sprint and as she came to Solar said "Get as much of the sand through as you can, no point saving Amber if we're gonna suffocate anyway."

 

She then dived through the gate and her magic left Amber for a moment as she threw her through the gate. She came to a sliding stop on the ship and caught Amber, gently laying her onto the ground. "We need a medical team over here!" she shouted "hurry!"

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Scarlett was fast approaching the gate. She wasn't sure how long Amber would last so as a last resort she levitated the pony off of her back and pulled her through the air behind her gently. She began to sprint and as she came to Solar said "Get as much of the sand through as you can, no point saving Amber if we're gonna suffocate anyway."

 

She then dived through the gate and her magic left Amber for a moment as she threw her through the gate. She came to a sliding stop on the ship and caught Amber, gently laying her onto the ground. "We need a medical team over here!" she shouted "hurry!"

 

 

A dozen ponies immediately rushed to them, bending downwards to examine Amber, who lay in a pool of sweat on the floor. Her breaths were ragged and unnatural in rhythm or pattern. One white pony carefully put his ear to her chest. The heartbeat was faint but she was still very much alive. "Uh, ma'am? What exactly happened to the pegasus?" He queried, with one raised eyebrow.


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A dozen ponies immediately rushed to them, bending downwards to examine Amber, who lay in a pool of sweat on the floor. Her breaths were ragged and unnatural in rhythm or pattern. One white pony carefully put his ear to her chest. The heartbeat was faint but she was still very much alive. "Uh, ma'am? What exactly happened to the pegasus?" He queried, with one raised eyebrow.

 

Scarlett worriedly said "I don't know, but from my reasonably small amount of medical knowledge I'd say it was either heatstroke," she paused for a moment, "or some sort of drug withdrawal. A strong drug at that. But you ponies are the experts, what's wrong with Amber and what can I do to help?!"


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Solar, making sure she had the wet sand, sped through the gate and skidded to a stop by the medical ponies. She trotted to Amber's side and put a hoof to her friend's forehead.

 

"Okay, she's breathing," she muttered, breathing a sigh of relief, "that's good, but she needs help! Does anypony know what's wrong with her?"


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Solar, making sure she had the wet sand, sped through the gate and skidded to a stop by the medical ponies. She trotted to Amber's side and put a hoof to her friend's forehead.

 

"Okay, she's breathing," she muttered, breathing a sigh of relief, "that's good, but she needs help! Does anypony know what's wrong with her?"

 

The red pony turned to Solar "Your suit! Solar, your suit! Your suit has basic diagnostic scanner, it won't find anything big like a rare disease but it's a start right? Those features in my suit are currently disabled, it would take some time to calibrate after decades of non-use. But your suit should have them already enabled!" She thought to herself 'I really hope she knows how to use it'


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At that moment, Lightning slid in. "Whoa! Is she still alive? Please tell me she's alive!" "She's alive, but we don't know what's happening to her yet. You know her?" asked the white pony. "I do, or I did anyway.... But's that's not important right now! What's important is that we make sure she stays alive. Is there anything I can do?"

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