critique wanted Oc help please

[Luminous Night 71]

Can someone help me make this into a male/ stallion

Edited June 21, 2016 by Masonthedialga

[Illiad Easle 3,139]

@,

 

Okay, here's a few simple steps that will go a long way to adjusting the gender of the image.

 

1. Remove the eyelashes, really simple and already looks less feminine

2. Straighten the muzzle lines, straight lines lend themselves to a more masculine appearance.

 

Then we get into a bit harder of steps, but they also help.

 

3. Increase the waist to be the same or slightly less thick than the withers/barrel, a more cylindrical chest area will help.

4. Finally, widen the tops of the legs, not much if you're going for a slender appearance, though the stronger you want them to look the wider the legs will need to be, just ensure that the hooves are at least as wide as the tops. The back legs especially would need to be wider at the top.

 

Anyway I hope that helps. Though I'm not very good at art I could certainly try my hand at it if you are still looking.