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Hey everyone!

I was just wondering if I could get your opinions on my new chibi style of drawing ponies:

 

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Hope you guys like them, I'm getting back into drawing ponies again :)

Let me know what you think!

 

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Here's Fluttershy!

 

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Hey everyone! I was just wondering if I could get your opinions on my new chibi style of drawing ponies:           Hope you guys like them, I'm getting back into drawing ponies again Let

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Thanks so much guys! I'm so happy you all like them xx

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wow! those look really good! i quite like the style as it is, i'd also like to see more  ^_^
i just think twilight horn is looks the littlest bit too long  :rarity:

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wow! those look really good! i quite like the style as it is, i'd also like to see more  ^_^

i just think twilight horn is looks the littlest bit too long  :rarity:

 

Awww thankyou so much!

I agree, I went a little overboard with Twilight's horn :P

My digital tablet is currently broken, but as soon as it's fixed I'll be posting some more :D

They look really nice, great job.

 

Thankyou so much! :D

Glad you like them :)

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My only negative opinion is that Twilight's right cheek (your left) looks too big. I'm reminded of those Cabbage Patch Kids that I do not like. :P

But other than that, they're really cute! :wub:

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My only negative opinion is that Twilight's right cheek (your left) looks too big. I'm reminded of those Cabbage Patch Kids that I do not like. :P

But other than that, they're really cute! :wub:

 

Oooh now that you've pointed it out, that's all I can see! XD

Glad you like them aside from that :) xx

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I think its good. You already have a unique and identifiable style, which is great.

 

The line work may benefit with being thinned some, or perhaps some more 'hard'

variation. I quite like the nose/mouth area, good use of thin and thick lines.

 

I'd say i'm not a fan of Twi's hair shading, partially cause it's only on the hair.

That said I don't think that kind of shading would best suit your style I honestly

think flat color would look just fine; possibly cel shading. But as it is, I wouldn't 

even call that a complaint, barely a nit-pick. Just refine what you already got.

 

Also, as previously mentioned, the horn. But honestly I like it. Occasionally

oversize body parts are quite humorous. Same goes for undersized bits XD

 

Of course, and as it always is with art, my opinions are massively subjective.

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I think its good. You already have a unique and identifiable style, which is great.

 

The line work may benefit with being thinned some, or perhaps some more 'hard'

variation. I quite like the nose/mouth area, good use of thin and thick lines.

 

I'd say i'm not a fan of Twi's hair shading, partially cause it's only on the hair.

That said I don't think that kind of shading would best suit your style I honestly

think flat color would look just fine; possibly cel shading. But as it is, I wouldn't 

even call that a complaint, barely a nit-pick. Just refine what you already got.

 

Also, as previously mentioned, the horn. But honestly I like it. Occasionally

oversize body parts are quite humorous. Same goes for undersized bits XD

 

Of course, and as it always is with art, my opinions are massively subjective.

 

Thankyou so much, I love getting useful critique :)

I agree with the hair shading comment :)

Glad you like them! :D x

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Looks beautiful! Are they on Deviantart? (Url?)

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Thank you! :)

Yes they are, my deviantart is: http://fia94.deviantart.com/ :)

The latest drawings are traditional due to my tablet being broken, but as soon as it's fixed I'll be posting more digital ponies :) xx

Looks like they already are in my favorites. :D Edited by Hierok
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Haha no way! :)

Thankyou so much :D xx

Can I do a commision here? Could you make my avatar into a chibi form? I would really like that! Edited by Hierok
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If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. :smug:

Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike.

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Can I do a commision here? Could you make my avatar into a chibi form? I would really like that!

 

Yes that would be awesome!

If you send me a note on DeviantArt (with a picture of the pony you want me to draw, and what pose you'd like them in), we can arrange it :D

I normally get commissions done within a week, but it might be two weeks due to me needing to order my new tablet :)

If that's all okay, send me a note on DeviantArt and we'll chat :D

Thanks so much! :) xx

You style is indeed just too cute :D I agree with a previous poster though about Twi's cheek :)

 

Love it in general :)

 

Awww thanks, I'm so glad you like it :D xx

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Hello @Fia94

 

First and foremost, I should inform you that given that you seek opinions regarding you piece instead of simply showcasing it the topic shall be relocated into Photo Finish's Magics. Furthermore, the fitting tag of Critique Wanted will be added.

 

Endearingly adorable style, I must say. Not the classical pony chibi, if I do recall correctly, but precious nevertheless, 

 

Have a lovely day, I hope you continue with your practice.

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Hello @Fia94

 

First and foremost, I should inform you that given that you seek opinions regarding you piece instead of simply showcasing it the topic shall be relocated into Photo Finish's Magics. Furthermore, the fitting tag of Critique Wanted will be added.

 

Endearingly adorable style, I must say. Not the classical pony chibi, if I do recall correctly, but precious nevertheless, 

 

Have a lovely day, I hope you continue with your practice.

 

Thankyou very much, for moving it and for the compliment :D xx

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