A drawing i did (need some feedback)

[Altscar 49]

So my Girlfriend and I are going to different colleges in about 8 weeks. She is going to college in Washington state, U.S. and I'm going to college just 3 hours east of where I currently live xD. Anyways i drew something with paint.net to commemorate our friendship and something to remember the both of us by. I drew a human form of her Minecraft character since she doesn't have a pony OC (her OC is human) as well as my OC (Which is a pony) that i made myself (Altscar). This artwork was 100% done by me, i used no reference pictures nor bases in the making of said "artwork". 

As i said, feedback is much appreciated. So go ahead, tear my soul in half if you have to xD

 

So here is the artwork:

 

Edited June 24, 2017 by Altscar