music Some random love song I wrote

[PhonyBrony 275]

Hay there,

 

So im trying to get into the best position to ask out this girl and I made some music to perhaps help.

Posting in on facebook got no feedback, no suprise there.

 

So I decided why dont I get some of my MLPForums peers to listen to it and tell me what they think?

 

 

 

 

Yes, I don't sing very much so this probably sounds like feces.

 

Lyrics:

took my phone out on the highway

tried to call you e-ver-y day

held my hands out waiting for my

efforts to pay - yeah

 

tearing up my map in despair

wishing I knew that you were there

if only I could tell you

how - I feel when -

 

//chorus

I get lost

in my memories

Letting dreams die out

and letting fear - flow in

 

When I get lost

in this game for two

Only you can know

How much that I love you

 

I get lost

when you call my name

Even though i know

that it is always the same

 

And when I cry

I know what to do

I'll just show the world

How much that I love you

//Chorus end

 

Thought that I was now mature enough

To handle being in love

But clearly that is not

the case - with you -

 

Figured It would take a thousand tears

but perhaps ive grown through the years

But i've known all - along

you don't love me

 

Asked myself how I should get home

Tried to find out where I could be

Held my map out looking for

anything that I knew

 

Called a taxi, He didnt know

Asked a stanger, neither did he

But I couldn't take it no more

oh-- like when

 

//chorus here

 

 

the Phony Brony

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HOLY! WOW.... this song is amazing!

How did you make it! YOU MUST TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Chigens and Kay 3,832]

You know I love all your music PhonyBrony.

 

This one is amazin'.

[PhonyBrony 275]

HOLY! WOW.... this song is amazing!

How did you make it! YOU MUST TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Step 1: Fall in love

Step 2: Get inspired to write a song

Step 3: Install FL Studios

Step 4: Write melody and lyrics

Step 5: Sing

Step 6: Add other instruments to the song

Step 7: Export MP3

Step 8: Get ignored

 

 

You know I love all your music PhonyBrony.

 

This one is amazin'.

 

I love you too! xD

Seriously though, Chigens, I'm glad you like this stuff and Im glad you're willing to tell me that. Lots of people only do one or the other.

 

thanks

the Phony Brony

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"Step 8: Get ignored"

 

Do i have to slap you? 500 youtube subs aint being ignored :3

[Chigens and Kay 3,832]

I love you too! xD

Seriously though, Chigens, I'm glad you like this stuff and Im glad you're willing to tell me that. Lots of people only do one or the other.

 

thanks

the Phony Brony

 

Well I got like all of your songs on my PSP and they help me get through work and other days.

 

Your music is like..."Oh I gotta' hear that song again". They have that kinda' feel to me.

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

Add: step nine: get together 4 friends

step ten: buy some instruments

step 11: put on a show and record it on a video to post on youtube

step 12: watch the hits pile up!

[Akemi Homura 7,680]

Still a better love story than Twilight.

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

Unfortunately.

[PhonyBrony 275]

"Step 8: Get ignored"

 

Do i have to slap you? 500 youtube subs aint being ignored :3

 

haha Thanks! But ignored means that the 780 friends on facebook never listen to anything I post. Pony related or not.

 

Well I got like all of your songs on my PSP and they help me get through work and other days.

 

Your music is like..."Oh I gotta' hear that song again". They have that kinda' feel to me.

 

Yay! I have a fan! xD

Hopefully you can get raise for increased productivity xD

 

Add: step nine: get together 4 friends

step ten: buy some instruments

step 11: put on a show and record it on a video to post on youtube

step 12: watch the hits pile up!

 

I Should start a band! But thats not quite the music I make.. I'd be the composer, and nobody ever knows about the composer of music xD I don't sing normally so yeah.

 

Still a better love story than Twilight.

 

Haha, I never read that. Or saw it. And based on what I hear, my English teacher has love stories that are better than twilight.

 

Thanks

the Phony Brony

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

Welcome.