Razvedka (DD song)

[Vlazamal 338]

Experimented with something different

 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

Ok

It's good to sometimes give things a break. That snare staled out early. Make sure you vary your patterns or change what instrument keeps the beat. Some bells and chimes would work here. Up your brass in the mix and maybe add some tremolo strings for some tension.

All in all, it's an ok listen, but your rhythms and melodies need more development.