Vector based Rarity with Fleur (Celestia, Cadence) type of body

[Motion Spark 7,807]

what do you think, fabulous enough?

 

BEFORE

 

AFTER

EDIT: I fixed her snout, and chest area (it looked like stallion too ), and the stroke on the upper part of her back left leg

 

EDIT: I did a lot of changes on it, the problem were the shape of the head and the neck (it was damn long! ). I also reduced the size of her torso and changed the positions of her hooves (in a much more graceful way). I'm pretty content with the result

Edited July 7, 2012 by Motion Spark

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

The body proportions seem to be correct, but there is one problem....

The head. On a body like that, it looks more like a stallions head. It seems for this, you blended a stallion's and a pony's. So yeah, you might wanna work on that.

Besides that, though, it's good!

[Love4discord18 269]

That's awesome!! Her snout looked weird though, can't put my finger on it though. Maybe too long?

[Motion Spark 7,807]

ur right, i'll fix it up

[PegasisterTaco 318]

Seems perfect enough except umm... The snout. It's a lil' too... long. But overall, very nice. I wondor how you did it.

[freedomwings 4]

I love this!

[Shankveld 4,949]

no image :s ~

[Motion Spark 7,807]

no image :s ~

 

I was editing, you should see it by now

 

Seems perfect enough except umm... The snout. It's a lil' too... long. But overall, very nice. I wondor how you did it.

 

The body proportions seem to be correct, but there is one problem....

The head. On a body like that, it looks more like a stallions head. It seems for this, you blended a stallion's and a pony's. So yeah, you might wanna work on that.

Besides that, though, it's good!

 

thanks for your feedback, what do you think now? it was made in flash cs6

[PegasisterTaco 318]

Oh, that's just marvelous! Just MARVELOUS!

[Shankveld 4,949]

I agree with the others, looks a little off. Maybe the legs are TOO long, or the mane and tail are too short. ~

 

Horn should be longer as well

great good on the vectoring though ~

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

thanks for your feedback, what do you think now? it was made in flash cs6

 

I still think the head is incorrect. This is the "proper" type of head:

It's still good, though.

[Motion Spark 7,807]

hmmmm ... now i see. The problem may be the head, i'll change it. And thanks shank, maybe the legs aren't graceful enough, i'll change that as well

[WiponCat 54]

this is pretty sweet! I like the concept of this