First Fan Art Picture

[morethanicecream 117]

Tell me what you think of my first MLP fan drawing, hopefully you guys like it. Rainbow Dash for the win.

[BobCoffin56 20]

thats not half bad for a first drawing.

[Fluttermedic 86]

It's pretty decent and good for a first drawing, keep drawing more, and you'll see your skill go up exponentially.

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

Good for a first drawing

 

My critique though:

 

Make her a little less chunky. You just need to work on your proportions a little bit, but its still pretty good

[morethanicecream 117]

thanks you guys, I will continue to work on pictures. I am working on one today, I will soon be back with more pictures

[~Chaos~ 3,971]

Great drawing for your first one, just keep at it! Nice work

[morethanicecream 117]

Thank you all for the great encouragement. This is why I am proud to be a brony. Everyone is so nice, so awesome, so epic.

[Strawberry Tart 161]

My critique (i don't care if you don't want one):

 

First of all, I'd like to compliment the mane and the tail. I do this for a lot of art, but most people are surprisingly good at drawing manes. You used very bright colors, and that accents the mane...

 

Second of all, I hate the flank. Offense intended (this is a critique). Luckily for you, that's the only thing I hate. What I hate about the butt is that you made it huge. Try to make it smaller next time; if you fit a circle into the flank, it would be about as big as a circle you would fit into the head...if that makes any sense.

 

Third, the cutie mark is too small. I can barely see it! Make it bigger.

 

Last, the legs are well drawn, except for the left back leg. Most ponies' hooves get bigger towards the bottom; this hoof gets smaller. The other legs are, as I said, fine.

 

This art is quite good for a first try. Keep practicing, and it'll be perfect!!

[morethanicecream 117]

My critique (i don't care if you don't want one):

 

First of all, I'd like to compliment the mane and the tail. I do this for a lot of art, but most people are surprisingly good at drawing manes. You used very bright colors, and that accents the mane...

 

Second of all, I hate the flank. Offense intended (this is a critique). Luckily for you, that's the only thing I hate. What I hate about the butt is that you made it huge. Try to make it smaller next time; if you fit a circle into the flank, it would be about as big as a circle you would fit into the head...if that makes any sense.

 

Third, the cutie mark is too small. I can barely see it! Make it bigger.

 

Last, the legs are well drawn, except for the left back leg. Most ponies' hooves get bigger towards the bottom; this hoof gets smaller. The other legs are, as I said, fine.

 

This art is quite good for a first try. Keep practicing, and it'll be perfect!!

 

thanks, I am now editing in photoshop. I can edit some of it, but maybe not all