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[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

Can I join? The old RP died, and I love PMD with all my heart and want to be part of something. If so, I could start typing the description ASAP. (By the way, for some reason I can't view the spoiler with factions. Nothing shows up at all, so I can't really see )

Eeyup, you can join, just make sure to fill out one of the applications correctly! There are already several accepted ones that you can look at if you need any examples.

 

And not sure about the spoiler not working, that's odd. Are the rest of them working?

 

Anyway, here's the factions that are in the spoiler;

 

 

The Divisa Mafia

 

The Divisa Mafia is a crime syndicate that was founded when the island had started building cities. It was originally called 'The Ghost Gang', but grew to the point where there were many Pokemon in the gang who were not the Ghost type. Out of respect, they changed their name to The Divisa Mafia.

 

The Divisa Mafia is a very wealthy group that is lead by many of the wealthiest Pokemon on the island, most remaining anonymous. Their main activities consist of extorting money from individuals, keeping various business monopolies, and maintaining the Mago Fields, where Mago berries are grown, and their leaves are used to make Cigars, Cigarettes, and various Tobacco substitutes because Tobacco doesn't exist in the Pokemon World and I thought this could work as a decent substitute.

 

The Divisia Mafia is one of the more active groups, and underlings can often be seen running around committing minor crimes, while the major figures of the group remain hidden in the shadows. They mainly want to remove all opposition on the island so that they may continue to profit from their many lucrative and devious actions without trouble. They also wouldn't mind having complete control over all the Gold still in the Island...

 

Pokemon that tend to make this group are usually the Ghost, Dark, Poison, or Grass types.

 

The Rebuilders

 

This group, which many consider to be a cult, was actually founded waaaay before the discovery of Divisa, but have only gained power once they established themselves on the island. This group is fascinated with the Ancients; Their artwork, their inventions, their architecture, they regard the Ancients as the greatest beings to ever grace the planet, even better then Arceus Itself.

 

Due to this, they quickly went to the ruins on the island and began rebuilding them, as tribute to the Ancients so that their memory would never be forgotten. Since the group consisted mostly of psychic, electric, and in general smart Pokemon, the ruins were soon rebuilt to as best of a replica as possible. The ruins were soon renamed as 'Crimson City' and were open for Pokemon all around to visit and marvel at the might of the Ancients.

 

The Rebuilders hold the Ancients in high regard. However, they do not hold the same respect for their fellow Pokemon. They believe that architecture that differs from what the Ancients created is a Sin, and those who do so are disrespecting the Ancient's wisdom. As such, they wish to turn all of the island, and ultimately the world, into what they expect the Ancients would want; A sprawling Metropolitan technological wonderland.

 

This group is actually one of the more relaxed groups, and are seldom seen actively causing trouble. In fact, they tend to keep to themselves mostly, staying within their city. They can also sometimes be found convincing visitors to join their cause, and sometimes even assisting other Pokemon nearby that are in need, as an effort to not only increase their numbers, but to create and keep a good public image. Pokemon that tend to make this group are usually the Electric, Steel, Psychic, or Normal types.

 

The TNI (True Native Islanders)

 

The TNI is a group that has actually recently been founded, roughly 50 years ago. The TNI consist of Pokemon whose ancestors were natives of the island, and they have one very simple goal; They want every single Pokemon who immigrated to their island to get the hell out.

 

They are disgusted with how the island has changed due to all these Pokemon coming in from nowhere and making monuments to their false gods, and altering their once perfect island. They don't really care where the immigrant Pokemon go, they just want them gone so they can have the peace and quiet their ancestors had years ago. They're also not afraid to get their hands dirty if it means even one less Pokemon on their island.

 

Pokemon that tend to make this group are usually the Rock, Ground, Fire, or Bug types.

 

The Terrae Lex Guild

 

This guild was founded roughly 135 years ago, in an effort to curb the crime on the island. The Pokemon Exploration Federation, what is ultimately the closest thing the world has to an government, has it's HQ on the mainland, and due to it being so far away, they're practically useless to depend on should a disaster happen on the island. Due to the, the Guild was founded.

 

The guild is a very strict group that has very high standards when it comes to their members; Each recruit must be in top physical condition, and be the top of their class. Even the smallest flaw could result in a rejection from the guild. Due to their high standards, there aren't that many members in the guild, making it hard to patrol all the island, and harder to handle confrontations with the Mafia.

 

The guild's ultimate goal is to bring law, order, and justice to the island. They believe that if they control the island, then harmony will finally exist on the chaotic island. As such, they are always planning ways to eliminate the other groups that threaten theirs, and to have full control of the island and enforce their laws, and bring the criminals to justice.

 

Pokemon that tend to make this group are usually the Water, Fighting, Dragon or Flying types.

[ShinyRibbonsAndSparkles 164]

Eeyup, you can join, just make sure to fill out one of the applications correctly! There are already several accepted ones that you can look at if you need any examples.

 

And not sure about the spoiler not working, that's odd. Are the rest of them working?

 

The other spoilers I can see. It was just the factions spoiler I couldn't view. Thanks. So do you need more of a certain group? Or can I pick freely?

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

The other spoilers I can see. It was just the factions spoiler I couldn't view. Thanks. So do you need more of a certain group? Or can I pick freely?

Here are the current standings regarding groups and members and whatnot;

 

Mafia: 2

Rebuilders: 0

TNI: 0

Guild: 2

Neutral: 1

 

But you don't need to join in a specific group just because it's low, join in whichever group you wanna be in, it'll be much more fun that way! ; )

[ShinyRibbonsAndSparkles 164]

Here are the current standings regarding groups and members and whatnot;

 

Mafia: 2

Rebuilders: 0

TNI: 0

Guild: 2

Neutral: 1

 

But you don't need to join in a specific group just because it's low, join in whichever group you wanna be in, it'll be much more fun that way! ; )

 

I can't type the bio right away, but I'll try to soon. It's super late here and I can never type correctly when I'm sleep deprived.

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

I can't type the bio right away, but I'll try to soon. It's super late here and I can never type correctly when I'm sleep deprived.

 

Don't worry about it, the deadline for entries is a week away, so there's plenty of time to get it in! Just send it in whenever you're ready to!

[Aureity 3,055]

This RP needs some CPR! C'mon guys, so many of you liked the idea, now when it's time to actually post in it you all disappear. http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png

[Vaporeon 1,168]

This RP needs some CPR! C'mon guys, so many of you liked the idea, now when it's time to actually post in it you all disappear. http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png

 

I don't know what to say in my first post. I was waiting for another person before I start. I'll try and post in a bit because this is too good of an idea to die.

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

I guess he'll be a Rebuilder.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/djenty-the-alakazam-r1177 Is this ok?

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

I guess he'll be a Rebuilder.

http://mlpforums.com...-alakazam-r1177 Is this ok?

 

Almost Djenty, but it's missing a few things. Mainly

 

Species:

Ability:

Moveset:

Faction:

 

Just fill those out in the 'Other' slot, and your character should be good to go!

 

Also, is Djenty a real word?

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

Almost Djenty, but it's missing a few things. Mainly

 

Species:

Ability:

Moveset:

Faction:

 

Just fill those out in the 'Other' slot, and your character should be good to go!

 

Also, is Djenty a real word?

 

Oh, sorry. And kind of. Djent itself is a sub-genre of metal, so Djenty is basically just adding a y to the end of it.

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

Oh, sorry. And kind of. Djent itself is a sub-genre of metal, so Djenty is basically just adding a y to the end of it.

 

No worries, just edit them in and everything'll be fine!

 

And wow, I did not know it was real. ... Nor did I know there were sub genres of Metal. I guess that shows how much I know of the world of music! : P

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

Alright, is my character ready now? I have made the necessary changes that you asked for.

And tried to not make it Mary Sue-ish.

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

Alright, is my character ready now? I have made the necessary changes that you asked for.

And tried to not make it Mary Sue-ish.

 

You're character's accepted! I'd just recommend that during the RP you throw a few more details in and flesh things out a bit more, but other then that, Accepted!

[ShinyRibbonsAndSparkles 164]

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/seth-r1181

 

I typed up a quick bio for a character I hope to use. If there's anything that should be added/changed, please let me know.

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

http://mlpforums.com...rs/_/seth-r1181

 

I typed up a quick bio for a character I hope to use. If there's anything that should be added/changed, please let me know.

 

Like Djenty, your app is missing a few things. Mainly, just put these in the 'Others' box and fill them out.

 

 

Species:

Ability:

Moveset:

Faction:

 

That, and you'll be good to go! Though you might want to consider putting some more details in your character's personality box.

[ShinyRibbonsAndSparkles 164]

Like Djenty, your app is missing a few things. Mainly, just put these in the 'Others' box and fill them out.

 

 

Species:

Ability:

Moveset:

Faction:

 

That, and you'll be good to go! Though you might want to consider putting some more details in your character's personality box.

 

I added some more details. Hopefully that will be enough. If you still need more details, I'll try to add more.

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

I added some more details. Hopefully that will be enough. If you still need more details, I'll try to add more.

 

Alright, it looks pretty good! You are accepted in! Just remember to use details often in your posts in the RP and you'll be good to go!

[Vaporeon 1,168]

Just remember to use details often in your posts in the RP and you'll be good to go!

 

That reminds me, how long should a post normally be? I can write a few short paragraphs but all of my posts won't be a novel. [Though I will always try to have a decent amount of detail and content] Edited July 29, 2012 by Ponymon Trainer Red

[Tom The Diamond 1,831]

That reminds me, how long should a post normally be? I can write a few short paragraphs but all of my posts won't be a novel. [Though I will always try to have a decent amount of detail and content]

 

Just make sure that your posts are well written, clear of any grammatical errors, sufficiantly describes the character, what they're doing, thinking, and saying, and also make sure to give something for other RPers to respond to. Nothing is more annoying to me then when this happens;

 

"Pete walked up to Etep. Etep looked pained, angry, and hurt. Pete wasn't entirely sure what to do. He then asked Etep "Hey Etep, are-Are you Ok?" he asked, not wishing for his friend to be in pain."

 

"I'm fine." Etep said to Pete."

 

That is something highly annoying since it doesn't really give the other person anything to, well, respond to or work with. It's ultimately just a giant annoyance that slows down the pace of the RP. So make sure you give the other players something to work with.

 

So if you do all that, I'd say that it should take maybe 2 Paragraphs minimum? That's just a bare estimate though. Just make sure your posts are well written, grammatically sound, describe your character's thoughts and actions, and give something for other players to work with, and you'll be fine!

[Vaporeon 1,168]

Just make sure that your posts are well written, clear of any grammatical errors, sufficiantly describes the character, what they're doing, thinking, and saying, and also make sure to give something for other RPers to respond to. Nothing is more annoying to me then when this happens;

 

"Pete walked up to Etep. Etep looked pained, angry, and hurt. Pete wasn't entirely sure what to do. He then asked Etep "Hey Etep, are-Are you Ok?" he asked, not wishing for his friend to be in pain."

 

"I'm fine." Etep said to Pete."

 

That is something highly annoying since it doesn't really give the other person anything to, well, respond to or work with. It's ultimately just a giant annoyance that slows down the pace of the RP. So make sure you give the other players something to work with.

 

So if you do all that, I'd say that it should take maybe 2 Paragraphs minimum? That's just a bare estimate though. Just make sure your posts are well written, grammatically sound, describe your character's thoughts and actions, and give something for other players to work with, and you'll be fine!

 

Ok thank you for clearing that up for me. I suppose I will go make my first post now.

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[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

This RP needs more people Half the people who said they would join haven't joined yet :/ I really hope this doesn't die..