I need opinions on a song I wrote

[Joaftheloaf 9]

So I was inspired by this comic http://fc01.devianta...che-d476m8y.png

 

to write this song:

 

 

I'm just wondering what you guys think about it. Tell me your opinions. Thanks!

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

I love it. The guitar goes perfectly with the vocals and the song is well constructed, nicely done. I can't really hear anything wrong with it.

[hana 217]

wow

i like the way it sound, and the voices the guitar does when you move your hand, it fits this song

its really great

[Flicker Sweet 3,391]

very deep lyrics, well balanced....yeah I can't say that I found anything to really criticize other than the fact that YOU HAVEN'T MADE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Joaftheloaf 9]

very deep lyrics, well balanced....yeah I can't say that I found anything to really criticize other than the fact that YOU HAVEN'T MADE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

haha thanks, and don't worry I have more stuff on the way

[Twinight125 45]

Holy cow that was amazing! I love this!

 

 

haha thanks, and don't worry I have more stuff on the way

 

[LunaBlu 6]

hey thats a great song! The guitar meshes perfectly with the vocals and reminds me of a lonely pony desperately looking for home well done!

[ThunderDash 2]

Good, no, Great job on this song. I can't hear any flaws in the song, which is always good. Also, I thought that you could use some soft piano in the background.