music my first drum & bass track

[termenchecks 146]

http://soundcloud.com/zylomafoni/running-with-scissors

zylomafoni - running with scissors
this is my first attempt at a more traditional track
i think i did well?
the snares may sound a little canny though

[Zachzab 14]

Hey that's pretty awesome, maybe if there was another snare sound somewhere in there it'd offset the rather clicky sound of the current snare, like have two different snares in there. But I love the space-string-piano-thing so much...

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

Overall it's really cool... Though it sounds insanely trebley to me... But overall it sounds pretty darn cool. It all sounds really tinny to me...

[Zachzab 14]

I have a nice headset so I can turn the bass up, but yeah I meant to mention that the bass could be a bit higher. Maybe sounding "Tiny" is the point? It's like, it's so tiny, it feels big... like space. There's so little in space, but it's such an infinitely large area... Empty, but there's something still there. Or I'm just digging too deep.