Last Hope

[Mirad 217]

I'm working on a new fic I've been thinking about for weeks. And this time it is a LOT better than my last one. It was so bad I trashed it.

 

Anyways, here's the link, so tell me what you think so far:

http://www.fimfictio...53605/Last-Hope

 

[EDIT]: Let you be warned this may be cancelled.

Edited October 5, 2012 by Gordon Freeman

[Dimitri Hammer 3,645]

At least Dimitri is alive......he will soon be dead though. Living without Fluttershy will lead to his suicide.

 

 

 

So far it sounds good comrade! Very good in my opinion.

[null123456 759]

I plan on reading it. I'm interested. :3

At least Dimitri is alive......he will soon be dead though. Living without Fluttershy will lead to his suicide.

 

 

 

So far it sounds good comrade! Very good in my opinion.

 

Who's Dimitri? And why does he nearly die?!

D: WHY WOULD YOU SPOIL IT FOR ME!?

Well, I better get reading.

Edited September 27, 2012 by Pixel Man

[Willowmist 12]

Pretty nice story!

 

Though there were a few grammatical errors, and the fact that five of the Mane Six (Elements of Harmony AND Main characters of the show) died so quickly sort of put me off, it still proved satisfying to read.

 

Awaiting the next chapter, keep up the good work!

[Mirad 217]

Pretty nice story!

 

Though there were a few grammatical errors, and the fact that five of the Mane Six (Elements of Harmony AND Main characters of the show) died so quickly sort of put me off, it still proved satisfying to read.

 

Awaiting the next chapter, keep up the good work!

 

I won't be working up on this til' Sunday at least, But thank ya for this positive feedback. Maybe I should think of more now... I don't know.