writing Dying Songs

[Nothing&NoOne 695]

That's me, isn't it? All wrapped up in chains.

Edited November 18, 2014 by Wrapped In Chains

[Finesthour 7,287]

Silly Lexa, I was scared when you told me to read this.

But it was something I have been expecting for a while.

 

I don't mind that you're falling for me in the slightest. You've always been special to my heart.

You may think your songs are dying, but I bring them back to life.

You've known this from the start, but you're scared of the ending.

 

I promise, the final piece in our song will be a happy one.

And that final piece will not come for many years.

 

The one thing that actually shocked me was the "again" part.

 

Never thought you actually did fall for me, really.

Edited September 29, 2012 by Finesthour

[Nothing&NoOne 695]

That's me, isn't it? All wrapped up in chains.

Edited November 18, 2014 by Wrapped In Chains

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

I just... loved this poem. I can actually relate to it.

 

But that is another story...

 

Anyway, I cant find any specific thing to pull out and complain about... other than your lack of oxymorons... but that is just me (I love oxymorons and poetry put together)

 

You should definitly write more, I would look forward to it.

[Dimitri Hammer 3,645]

Oh jeez. Reminds me of my wife again....damn these poems. They're so emotionally awesome yet heartbreaking for me to read.

Very good job comrade