RD&Scootaloo To Fly on Broken Wings Version 2

[Xero1 124]

So i decieded my original drawing of this idea wasn't good enough. You can see the original here http://mlpforums.com...gs-rdscootaloo/

So I completely redid it in Vector, put them in the sky to add a little more motion and really tried to bring this idea to life. Thoughts, Comments and Critique are all welcome. I definatly feel like this turned out better than my traditionally drawn version.

[Arcus (Silver Lining) Wind 983]

I love it! I wish Scoots could fly, but since she can't I'm glad she has somepony to look up to like Rainbow Dash.

I really like that you took them up in the sky. Really makes it feel like they accoplished so much more.

[Halfblood 364]

This concept is definitely adorable; Scootaloo taking a page from Pinkie's book and strappin' on some balloons for some flight, taking Dashie with her

 

My only criticism comes to RD's tail, which seems proportionally too big and too long here, compared to the rest of her. But other than that, this is a very cute vector art piece!

[Twilight_Scratch 13]

Adorable. Dashies mane seems a bit large but overall a good vector. Scootaloo is best pegasus it almost makes me sad to see here with broken wings. But like teacher like student

[Xero1 124]

I love it! I wish Scoots could fly, but since she can't I'm glad she has somepony to look up to like Rainbow Dash.

I really like that you took them up in the sky. Really makes it feel like they accoplished so much more.

 

Thanks I really felt like they needed to be in the sky or it wouldn't really be flying

 

This concept is definitely adorable; Scootaloo taking a page from Pinkie's book and strappin' on some balloons for some flight, taking Dashie with her

 

My only criticism comes to RD's tail, which seems proportionally too big and too long here, compared to the rest of her. But other than that, this is a very cute vector art piece!

 

Well i did intentionally stretch her tail in order to show its being pulled by the string... but your right it is deffinatly to wide I may correct that later

Adorable. Dashies mane seems a bit large but overall a good vector. Scootaloo is best pegasus it almost makes me sad to see here with broken wings. But like teacher like student

 

Her mane was also intentionally stretched for effect but perhaps too much and yeah I image this happened during some sort of lesson.

 

Sorry it took me so long to respond I'm still catching up on midterms. when I have more time I may make yet another better version... I really want to get this one right.