Rarity Doodle

[hellocat 308]

Hey everypony! I spent a few minutes (~15 min) doodling Rarity today. I know she looks a bit off, but it's been at least a few weeks since the last time I've been able to do some drawing so I don't particularly mind I suppose.

 

[Motion Spark 7,811]

hi

 

it refreshing to see more of your doodles again

 

I'm gettiing into painting as well.

 

the snout is too wide and you would prefer to put the her mane in a layer beneath the head so it doesn't look like it is attached to the side of her head, I liked the way you kinda blended the colors in the front part of her mane though.

[hellocat 308]

hi

 

it refreshing to see more of your doodles again

 

I'm gettiing into painting as well.

 

the snout is too wide and you would prefer to put the her mane in a layer beneath the head so it doesn't look like it is attached to the side of her head, I liked the way you kinda blended the colors in the front part of her mane though.

 

Thanks Motion! Yeah, it's great to find the time to do this sort of thing again. I really missed it haha.

 

I agree that the snout is too wide. The thing about the mane, I don't know why but I intentionally tried to make it look like the hair was attached there.. :/ But you're right, I should have had that below rather than on the face. Additionally, the shading on the back of the main needs a lot of work, the bottom of the face looks off since it is indented a bit, and I think I should have made the horn and the ears a little more distinct.

[Motion Spark 7,811]

Thanks Motion! Yeah, it's great to find the time to do this sort of thing again. I really missed it haha.

 

I agree that the snout is too wide. The thing about the mane, I don't know why but I intentionally tried to make it look like the hair was attached there.. :/ But you're right, I should have had that below rather than on the face. Additionally, the shading on the back of the main needs a lot of work, the bottom of the face looks off since it is indented a bit, and I think I should have made the horn and the ears a little more distinct.

 

I tried not to destroy yourself with critisism but I see that you did my job better lol

I can't wait to see another doodle from you (I hope it's Rarity again)

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

Some of the colors look very smushed, and blotched. Also the eye seems to be in an awkward position. Other those two things, it's a very nice painting.