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Decided to resubmit this as I realized I needed to fix some things from the original. Again, hope you enjoy as its looking like I will continue the story. Feedback is still encouraged!

 

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Sequinox

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Your people are so cute!  I love how much character they have.  :)  At first I wasn't sure how you were going to blend the people in with the ponies, but I love what you're doing with it.  I also like how it goes from black and white to color. 

 

Can't wait to see more!

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Kamarat

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I'm sorry to say this but there is a mistake in 4th picture wink.png 
(Perect=Perfect) 

I liked it really, looking forward to another part. ( I know it sounds like I only checked for grammar D:)

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I'm sorry to say this but there is a mistake in 4th picture wink.png 

(Perect=Perfect) 

 

I liked it really, looking forward to another part. ( I know it sounds like I only checked for grammar D:)

 

Fixed it! Thanks for pointing that out! I had fixed it in one version, but overwrote it with the old version on accident! I need editors! XD

 

And inkers, writers, colorists, help with layout... :/

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You mean you need someone to look over your work and bitch? Count me in :)

In the picture with the snow angels the underlines of Kat's eyes combine with the line of her mouth makes it look as if she's chewing.

In the picture of her shoving snow in Drew's face her closed eye could curve downwards a bit more towards the nose.

 

I actually prefer the black and white, though I imagine that shading must be tedious.

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Tomorrow will take us away, far from home

No one will ever know our names

But the bard songs will remain.

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You mean you need someone to look over your work and bitch? Count me in smile.png

In the picture with the snow angels the underlines of Kat's eyes combine with the line of her mouth makes it look as if she's chewing.

In the picture of her shoving snow in Drew's face her closed eye could curve downwards a bit more towards the nose.

 

I actually prefer the black and white, though I imagine that shading must be tedious.

 

One thing about this is that it was drawn in about the span of 4 days. Throughout the illustration process, my art style changed significantly, and I have no idea why, nor am I complaining! XD There are little things here and there, but even in major releases there are. Also, Kat's face is supposed to be a little round, something that very few of the frames managed to capture. A lot of these drawings were first attempts for expressions and poses that came out as passable so I just went with it. 

 

I think the comics will probably be a majority black and white, as the shading is actually pretty easy for me, and the coloring requires me to use some pretty unorthodox techniques. However...

 

 

 

well i could be a "colorist" though i do have an unorthodox way of shading in color if you want me to show examples of my coloring skills just ask.

 

Well I'd be happy to let you take a crack at coloring something from this. If you want I can send you a raw of one of the frames or something and we'll see what you can do!

 

 

 

Why did I lol slightly at that? But, anyway, nice comic. It has very good art. I love it! Can't wait to see more, I bet they'll be as good as the first. wink.png

 

I would hope you would 'lol' at least a little! I hope to mix in a bit more humor and intrigue in coming pages, as this one is just to set the stage!

 

Thank you all for the feedback! I'm LOVING hearing from you, especially critiques! Keep em coming!

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This is awesome, I hope there is more in store biggrin.png, this will be a real test of their relationship biggrin.png I can't stop chuckling at this comic strip..

 

Thanks so much! It's for people like you that I am doing this! I hope you all like the directions the story takes and I promise to pay attention to input from the fans of this! ^_^

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i actually really love teh way this is layed out, especially the scene when he opens his eyes, and through the glasses? great! i also like how you only coloured the last panel. smile.png great way to separate and break it.

 

Thank you so much! That is my fiancee's favorite part too! I just got done looking at a thread with some of your work. I'm curious if you might be interested in collaborating on somethings sometime?

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Rob Shneider has the life he always wanted, but unfortunately his life is going to be turned upside down, and with a shooting star he's about to become.. A pony! And he's about to find out, that being a pony isn't so easy. You'll laugh till you're HORSE! Rob Shneider is.. THE PONY! Rated PG-13

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Rob Shneider has the life he always wanted, but unfortunately his life is going to be turned upside down, and with a shooting star he's about to become.. A pony! And he's about to find out, that being a pony isn't so easy. You'll laugh till you're HORSE! Rob Shneider is.. THE PONY! Rated PG-13

 

Paul Schneider couldn't pull off that beard. I'm thinking more Paul Giamatti. 

 

 

 

That is a great comic.  Very nicely drawn, and it looks to be a good start to a story. I also laughed pretty hard at their expressions when they found out.

 

Thank you. There wasn't as much comedy in this one as there will be in a later pages, but the response has been wonderfully positive nonetheless!

 

 

 

i would love to!  the unfortunate part is well, me getting to my materials, and getting things done on time.  im god-awful at starting something and never finishing it :(

 

but if youre still game, i am too :P

 

Oh I am desperately guilt of that as well. I figured teammates and fans will force me to maintain some kind of consistent schedule. I'm the same way with materials, that's why I've just started using whatever I can. Most of my art is copy paper with a mechanical pencil or a ball-point pen I got from the bank, then photographed from my cell-phone and cleaned up in photoshop. I AM THE HOBO OF ARTISTS!

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