visual art Comic: Heavy metal maid

[Sheogorath 1,155]

The original post will be updated as more pages are being made.

Also, feedback is welcome, critique recommended as well as greatly wanted.

 

Story summary: Basil, a young boy cursed with a set of girly eyes and his single mother have been toughing it out since his father passed away. Until one day Basil's workplace undergoes changes when the owner changes and becomes a maid cafe. In order to keep his work and help his mother with the bills as well as fund hims music classes Basil needs to go "undercover" as a girl in the new maid cafe! Will his cover and spirit last!? Read to see.

(Rest of the pages behind links)

http://img.photobuck...lmaid/page2.jpg PAGE 2

http://img.photobuck...maid/page3b.jpg PAGE 3

Edited January 19, 2012 by Pencils

[Lady Rarity Pony 4,892]

Can't wait to see the rest, that's quite something you got there :3

[Shankveld 4,949]

wow! You're so talented!! Can't wait to read more :3 !! ~

[D1SC0RD 987]

HEHEHEHEH. It's beautiful

Also, really good introduction to the mother and son.

You can tell that she tries her best and that the son wants to make things easier for her... And that's just the first 3 pages!

 

I can't wait to see more of it c:

 

On a side not... Anypony else laugh at the license plate?

[Ezynell 2,037]

That is great! Did you draw it electronically? But one question, on page three, why does the mom call her daughter "son"?

 

Oh, and in page three, second panel, the main character kind of looks like a furry.

[Shadow Stallion 436]

Oh my gosh

 

This is amazing.

 

And the maid cafe thing sounds interesting

 

I love gender-bending(:

 

Can't wait to see moar!

[Sheogorath 1,155]

That is great! Did you draw it electronically? But one question, on page three, why does the mom call her daughter "son"?

 

Oh, and in page three, second panel, the main character kind of looks like a furry.

 

 

It is a boy, with really girly eyes and shrimpy petite body, it is the whole plot point behind the comic.

And the main character has "cat ears" out of bangs because of how he ties his ponytail, which is something I plan to poke humor out of later. =)

[Ezynell 2,037]

It is a boy, with really girly eyes and shrimpy petite body, it is the whole plot point behind the comic.

And the main character has "cat ears" out of bangs because of how he ties his ponytail, which is something I plan to poke humor out of later. =)

 

Now I feel wrong that I was... entranced by page 2...

[Sheogorath 1,155]

Now I feel wrong that I was... entranced by page 2...

 

XD Aw.

[Ezynell 2,037]

XD Aw.

 

Call me gay, but that's one hot boy.