my first pony sketch! Take 2!

[Rocco 571]

ok guys, after some much needed in put from some very skilled artiest on here i decided to reattempt my OC Fire Storm. 

 

-still working on the mane

- i like the short tail but its still under construction

- on cm yet, i still need to practice it.

- and i made her shorter so she is no longer limo pony!

 

but all in all for my second attempt done on copy paper with a good ole No.02 pencil. not bad

 

next i need to attempt a action pose and learn to use cs6 Illustrator.

 

[Night Shine 772]

Hey, this is pretty good.

 

I actually only see one problem with the drawing--the size is inconsistent. The front legs and the face are a lot smaller than the rest of the poni.

 

That said, I still think this is a really good drawing. The mane and tail look very detailed and show-accurate. The face has a unique expression, and the wings and hind legs are pretty much flawless.

 

Great job!

[Rocco 571]

thank you very much. im still learning and its hard to hammer out a really good drawing with all these people bothering me at work! it like they expect me to rent them rooms or something! dont they know im doing important work back here in my little hidden pony laden office? 

 

oh well one day i will get her right and i can start on my OC. 

[SurfSkateSoar 13]

Gotta Say, Lookin' Snazzy, But Like Night Shine said, Abit weird with the sizes, But its only Take 2, Theres plently more! Good Luck drawing in future mate

*BroHoof*