music Would anyone care to give this a listen?

[Fluttashe 8]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nj-dzENb0Jg

 

This song took me a solid 2 months, so it would be appretiated if I could get some criticism.

Give it a listen and tell me what you think!

Edited August 1, 2013 by SBB64
edited the cmv out

[~Vallo~ 409]

Dude, that was good. You've got some real talent. Keep making music, because you're on the right track.

Edited August 13, 2013 by ~Vallo~

[Antismurf9001 1,271]

This is really cool!  I don't know if this is what you were going for, but I could definitely see this as a boss fight theme for some nostalgic RPG.  I'm curious, how did you make this?

 

My only criticism is that it ends kind of abruptly, but again, if you're going for the game-like boss theme, then it would be looped anyways, and the end of this seems to set up a loop rather excellently.  In short, there's really no legitimate criticisms.

[Sensuna 138]

Nice man brohoof and respect for you it's great 
But I can't help but feel like this is from one or another final fantasy soundtrack? I dunno

but like was said before it feels like a nostalgic RPG boss fight theme good job

[HunterTSN 1,444]

Incredibly cool! you must have a lot of determination to work on this for two months, I usually work on songs for an hour and then abandon them, and they usually aren't anywhere near as good as this. Great job!