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CamRad18

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Hey guys! Looking for some constructive criticism! 

 

Choices choices choices

Whizzing by now gone

Chances chances chances

Hope their's more than one

 

An on-rails adventure

Going faster than

You'd like

 

Growing pains abound

Maturing quicker than

Is right

 

Choices choices choices

Whizzing by now gone

Chances chances chances

Hope their's more than one


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“I never found beauty in longing for the impossible and never found the possible to be beyond my reach.” 
― Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged

 

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