I Drew Fireball Rush Again (constructive critisizm welcome!)

[~Chaotic Fireball~ 498]

Here it is:

 

This is my (6th I think?) drawing. I decided to do the shading differently this time, so it will look a bit different from my other ones. Please comment if anything is wrong with it or needs to be changed.. I'll need to know for further reference. Thanks!

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

I like it. Looks really well made, the wings are good, like the pose, but there is one thing I would change. I have no idea what the cutie mark is. Maybe lighten down the bodies color, and add more to the cutie mark to give it a real POP!

 

Hope that helps.

 

Thanks and bro hoof /)

[~Chaotic Fireball~ 498]

I like it. Looks really well made, the wings are good, like the pose, but there is one thing I would change. I have no idea what the cutie mark is. Maybe lighten down the bodies color, and add more to the cutie mark to give it a real POP!

 

Hope that helps.

 

Thanks and bro hoof /)

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Thanks for the nice comment, it means a lot to me. Oh yeah, the cutie mark is a flaming comet

Tried to draw it diffently from last time. Ugh, well I'll work on that later. Thanks again.