Leafeon 2,702 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 Before anything is said, since I used a reference heavily, please love this. Anyways, this is a texture practice thing. I would like critique on it, cos yea. If you like me even faintly. 12 Eeveelutions: @Vaporeon: N-Harmonia : Ampharos @Flareon: Descant/Bard @Espeon: Locked @Umbreon: Lhee @Leafeon: Firebolt @Glaceon: Mal @Sylveon: Don'tDropThatDedenne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soundgarden 2,758 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 Well, I better let the overcritical side of me take over... My first critique is the mane. It's really rugged rather than smooth which in my opinion fits way more. Nothing wrong with rugged, but it's just way to rugged. There is also something wrong with her wing... Ponies in socks is personally something I don't like, but I feel like it's quite well made in this one. Otherwise, it's amazing! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MelancholicMemory 2,027 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 I like what you did with the texture, and the picture overall is beautiful! I love your art style, Firebolt! The whole night scene is lovely and your OC looks adorable in socks! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leafeon 2,702 March 8, 2013 Author Share March 8, 2013 Well, I better let the overcritical side of me take over... My first critique is the mane. It's really rugged rather than smooth which in my opinion fits way more. Nothing wrong with rugged, but it's just way to rugged. There is also something wrong with her wing... Ponies in socks is personally something I don't like, but I feel like it's quite well made in this one. Otherwise, it's amazing! It's supposed to be rugged, as is her mane in general. I changed it from a very rugged-style mane, so yea. Thanks for your critique, though! 1 Eeveelutions: @Vaporeon: N-Harmonia : Ampharos @Flareon: Descant/Bard @Espeon: Locked @Umbreon: Lhee @Leafeon: Firebolt @Glaceon: Mal @Sylveon: Don'tDropThatDedenne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scootalove 10,692 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 The mane does look a little rough. Pretty much, everything is perfect. Besides, I really like the art style. So anyway, the OC really does look lovely and cute in socks I guess. I really like her mane. 2 Credit: Moony © Forum FAQ Forum Rules Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmonic Revelations 8,837 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 You're such a great artist, Firebolt. Your work is amazing! I love how you textured the whole thing, as well as the frizzy mane. Plus ponies in socks are cool. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCraftyWhiteFox 371 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 (edited) very pretty. i love all of it. but it seems to have alittle bit much of gray in it- maybe add a thick line of a darkish white where you have it highlighted to show a distinct moonlight on her and some redish oranges around the hair annd a little in the hair so it makes it look alittle more interesting and feel more emotion in it- i mean its good period- that was just my thoughts about it. Edited March 8, 2013 by Nagare Boshi 1 DO things with a passion, or not at all and where ever you go, go with all of your heart! Be soo happy, that when others look at you, they become happy too! 20% Cooler! - Rainbow Dash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leafeon 2,702 March 8, 2013 Author Share March 8, 2013 very pretty. i love all of it. but it seems to have alittle bit much of gray in it- maybe add a think line of a darkish white where you have it highlighted and some redish oranges around the hair so it makes it look alittle more interesting Erm.... what? You're such a great artist, Firebolt. Your work is amazing! I love how you textured the whole thing, as well as the frizzy mane. Plus ponies in socks are cool. Thanks! :3 And Agreed. Heavily. The mane does look a little rough. Pretty much, everything is perfect. Besides, I really like the art style. So anyway, the OC really does look lovely and cute in socks I guess. I really like her mane. GUESSING IS NOT SOMETHING WE DO IN THESE PARTS, LIGHTNING. Jokes aside, thank you! :3 I like what you did with the texture, and the picture overall is beautiful! I love your art style, Firebolt! The whole night scene is lovely and your OC looks adorable in socks! Thanks. 3 Eeveelutions: @Vaporeon: N-Harmonia : Ampharos @Flareon: Descant/Bard @Espeon: Locked @Umbreon: Lhee @Leafeon: Firebolt @Glaceon: Mal @Sylveon: Don'tDropThatDedenne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Chaotic Fireball~ 499 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 I really like the picture, but I don't really like the new hair style, or her facial expression. To me, I prefer your Avatar picture, now that one is really special Hope I wasn't being bossy.... I'm sure I was being bossy.. 1 "Mama told me not to waste my life, she said spread your wings my little butterfly. Don't let what people say keep you up at night, and they can't detain you, 'cause wings were made to fly" ~Little Mix, Wings ~Drawing Requests~ Ask Me Anything ~ OC's ~ Art Gallery ~ Soarin' is best pony Join the navel revolution! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leafeon 2,702 March 8, 2013 Author Share March 8, 2013 I really like the picture, but I don't really like the new hair style, or her facial expression. To me, I prefer your Avatar picture, now that one is really special Hope I wasn't being bossy.... I'm sure I was being bossy.. It's the same one though... :V What on earth are you talking about? Off topic: I must draw Trixie in this style for better reference. Eeveelutions: @Vaporeon: N-Harmonia : Ampharos @Flareon: Descant/Bard @Espeon: Locked @Umbreon: Lhee @Leafeon: Firebolt @Glaceon: Mal @Sylveon: Don'tDropThatDedenne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gone Airborne 22,007 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 Honestly there really isn't much to critique ! Its a beautiful drawing very beautiful and love everything bout it. Like the others have said I do prefer the smooth hairstyle to the frizzy look. But nonetheless that is just outstanding. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twiliscael 3,962 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 I like this quite a lot, actually. The colors, the background, the lines... everything looks spot-on. However... The mane. I don't like that. I see where you're trying to go with it, and it's totally cool if you like it that way, but to me it just seems out of place. It conflicts too much with all the other lines. 3 I tend to take the high road, get stoned, and fly low . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygen 6,066 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 New firebolt art mehhh Gusta . Those are some pewtty socks . And yeah. I personally agree with the others in not really liking the texture of the mane, but thats just me. Regardless like always your drawings are wonderful. Are you sure your not actually a magician Firebolt? 1 Thanks to Gone Airbourne for the awesome sig! My Oc's, Ponysona, Bella Vocal Covers Blog, MLP Covers Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leafeon 2,702 March 8, 2013 Author Share March 8, 2013 New firebolt art mehhh Gusta . Those are some pewtty socks . And yeah. I personally agree with the others in not really liking the texture of the mane, but thats just me. Regardless like always your drawings are wonderful. Are you sure your not actually a magician Firebolt? I am actually Santa Christ. You know, I really like pancakes, and yesterday I saved puppies from a fire. So yea. I'm awesomer. Not to say magicians aren't the best things to exist ever. 1 Eeveelutions: @Vaporeon: N-Harmonia : Ampharos @Flareon: Descant/Bard @Espeon: Locked @Umbreon: Lhee @Leafeon: Firebolt @Glaceon: Mal @Sylveon: Don'tDropThatDedenne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygen 6,066 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 I am actually Santa Christ. You know, I really like pancakes, and yesterday I saved puppies from a fire. So yea. I'm awesomer. Not to say magicians aren't the best things to exist ever. I like Pancakes to . Does, and was the fire perhaps a byproduct of your own pyromaniac experiments? You know like watering your flowers with fire.. Magicians are pretty cool, even if magic isn't technically real for the most part, I still like magic . 1 Thanks to Gone Airbourne for the awesome sig! My Oc's, Ponysona, Bella Vocal Covers Blog, MLP Covers Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Soldier 2,044 March 8, 2013 Share March 8, 2013 (edited) My friggin' reaction to this: This art is just too addicting that I literally can't get off the page. But most of my reaction is: "WHAT IS THIS!? WHAT IS THIS!? WHAT IS MY LIFE!?" The art is VERY good. I like the ear ring too. A nice touch. Edited March 8, 2013 by Psyche Clops 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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