Bad Little Girl

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Hello guys, i have finished a new drawing of mine.

 

 

What do you guys think? So far i've gotten good responses from it (:

 

Hopefully I can get good replies from you guys too!

[The Soldier 2,044]

This is a rather interesting style (if you intend to put some sort of a style to it. )

 

The muzzle may need a little work, the horn doesn't not bend, and I'm not sure what's with the back wing.

 

But she looks good.

[Just some guy 1,070]

I read the thread title and I thought you drew a ponified Bad Girl from No More Heroes or something for a sec. Anyways...

 

I dig the art style you got!It looks very nice and I can actually see a corrupted Twilight wearing that outfit.Though I gotta say...the chin area looks kind of weird.Like,it's too angled at the little bend that's finishing the head shape,if that makes any sense.Her horn also looks a bit sharp and upward as well,but I honestly can't tell if that's actually on purpose or not since sharper features = evil.

 

The overall quality of the picture is very well-done,I like it!

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

The back of the first wing is her cape.

 

When i drew this, it was from a vector, and there was no wing behind the first wing.

 

I need more responses, and yes I know the muzzle is a little eh.. but it works.

and the horn, i ALWAYS have trouble with for some reason

 

EDIT: I can go back and fix some of these errors, though that would be a pain to do for some of the detail, but i'll do that and re upload it.

 

EDIT2: I appreciate the brohoofs! makes me feel good to keep drawing, And i'll keep improving with horns, like i said, i've always have trouble with horns, i re drew the horn like 5 times, i just can't get it right!     

Edited April 12, 2013 by ~Chaotic Fluttershy~

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Would love to get more positive feedback on this drawing!

 

Don't be shy, look at me in the eye and give me opinions. if you could please 

[Mr. Jaguar 1,403]

Hmm, you need to work on your proportions, I would say use references from the show as a basis for how their proportions should be. If you're drawing is not entirely based from a reference (as in, your drawing isn't supposed to be a 100% copy of another), you should still use references to get a good idea of how the characters should look. Look for pictures of the character you're trying to draw depicting them at the angle you want to draw them at, to see how they should look at said angle. If that's what you're already doing, try to work on your accuracy more, always keep an eye out for any flaws, even insignificant ones, and fix them (though I wouldn't toss a drawing if it's got one little flaw that you cant' fix, as long as it isn't anything too severe).

 

Use an HB pencil to sketch the entire drawing, then darken the lines (and anything black like pupils) as dark as you can with a 2B pencil to make the drawings stand out from the page better. I believe you have great potential, judging by your piece here, so follow my advice and keep at it.

[Lunia 332]

this is a interesting style of how you drew Twilight and i got to say if the show needs a Bad Girl Twilight Sparkle they should go here and ask permisson to use that art of yours BROHOOF /)

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Hmm, you need to work on your proportions, I would say use references from the show as a basis for how their proportions should be. If you're drawing is not entirely based from a reference (as in, your drawing isn't supposed to be a 100% copy of another), you should still use references to get a good idea of how the characters should look. Look for pictures of the character you're trying to draw depicting them at the angle you want to draw them at, to see how they should look at said angle. If that's what you're already doing, try to work on your accuracy more, always keep an eye out for any flaws, even insignificant ones, and fix them (though I wouldn't toss a drawing if it's got one little flaw that you cant' fix, as long as it isn't anything too severe).

 

Use an HB pencil to sketch the entire drawing, then darken the lines (and anything black like pupils) as dark as you can with a 2B pencil to make the drawings stand out from the page better. I believe you have great potential, judging by your piece here, so follow my advice and keep at it.

I get what you mean, but no pony can make an exact 'Copy' of a drawing of something that someone has already done.

 

No one's drawings are perfect, not even mine. I check more than 3 times to make sure I didn't forget anything at all.. though when I see my drawing uploaded, I see the mistakes, in which case that some peoples eyes don't normally see unless it's a digital photo.

 

For every drawing I do bud, I just use a Mechanical Pencil and a eraser, Nothing else.

 

I appreciate the advice, but a regular mechanical pencil what works best for me. I always go back and re do parts that need to be re done.

[Urkelbot 63]

I like it very much! The only things I noticed were that her forelegs seem a bit small in proportion to the rest of the body. The fix for that I imagine would be beefing them up and working on the perspective and foreshortening (both areas I struggle with) Also, I feel like the tail looks a bit flat. That may be nitpicking, I honestly don't know if there's a fix for that. It may just be the nature of Twi's tail. Oh, and I don't think the horn is that bad, Don't be afraid to use a straight edge if needed.

 

However, I Love the Hoof, and leg adornments! That sort of dark, dangerous Fleur de Lis' look. And the Crown has a great look of an ominous wrought iron fence look to it. Facial expression is dead on, and the bangs (fringe) look good! Keep it up, I'd like to see more in this costume style. /)

[Jokuc 8,174]

It's pretty good! It could use some improvements, for example the nose looks a little bit weird and the front-hooves are a little bit too thin. But otherwise it's a good drawing

[eightbithoof 518]

I'm still very new to drawing, so take any thoughts of mine with a grain of salt. /disclaimer-off

 

Thematically, I love it. Especially the expression on her face. It fits the "bad-girl" theme very well.

 

One thing I did notice, is the light reflections (if that's what you call them) in the eyes: they appear to be misaligned. As if they were caused by a different source for each eye. It throws off the eyes a touch.

 

I would also consider having her mane below the collar of the dress. The way it is now, it couldn’t have the length because part of the mane at least has to be growing out of her neck.

To reiterate, however, I do like this - I'd love to see more of Twilight in this vein.

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Twilight clearly can't leg, or back wing for that matter.

The legs are far too small for her body, and her back wing is not a pointed figure. Her back wing looks the same as her front wing.

On another note, her horn should be a bit shorter. It also needs to be a bit more... fat, to put it.

The back of her front wing is her cape bro.

 

Maybe next drawing i do, if it's something like this i should do some color in, shading etc. cause the reference i was looking at has had only 1 wing showing, then the back of it was her cape.