writing I can feel...

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

I can feel the end, deserving my name. All across this barren terrain which forms the constant threat of silence. To here and here, the everlasting epiphany that all creation is not in itself, equal.

 

I can feel the devastation nigh. In the landscape formed of tears and dreams. A fountain bearing youth for the caring saints, or rather their legends and actions. The never ending call to greater glory, manifested the texts of belief.

 

And I can feel…

 

Hear these metaphors, they are the words to save you.

Allow my lines to hold you tight.

Never realize that the truth is wrong

 

I can feel the past, and know your name. Decisions held to be forgotten. The last of every single memory, finally fading into the present.

 

I can feel the words I breathe. The dagger’s curse is razor’s wish. And the only way to know my end, is to walk the barren terrain we form.

 

I astound the earth, the mind, and soul. The remnants of a broken lie.

 

 

-David Favret

 

 

 

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*clap clap clap, wipes tear from eye* that was beautiful. You do a brilliant job writing poems/ poetry. 

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

Poetry at it's finest...

 

Very well done with that statement good sir!

 

It must've taken about a couple of hours to come up with that masterpiece!

 

Once again, bravo maestro, bravo!

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Poetry at it's finest...

 

Very well done with that statement good sir!

 

It must've taken about a couple of hours to come up with that masterpiece!

 

Once again, bravo maestro, bravo!

thank you

 

And it is funny, most people assume that takes a long time for me to write. I wrote this ( like most my other poems) in about 3 to 12 minutes.

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

thank you

 

And it is funny, most people assume that takes a long time for me to write. I wrote this ( like most my other poems) in about 3 to 12 minutes.

Your welcome!

 

Oh it's cool, it's just that well, when you think about it, statements like that are what can be considered quotes for the century.

 

And many do believe the poets put a lot of effort to make such a statement truthful and powerful.

 

But it is impressive, glad to see work at it's finest in less than 20 minutes! XD