Opinions on my art

[MidnightBlue 51]

I have just gotten into making art with my computer. This was the first thing I made, so I'd like some opinions on it. Critiscism is welcome, as I would like to know what I can do to improve.

 

What do you all think?

[Sweet Dreams 1,893]

Oooh! This looks pretty cool!

Not much criticism to give here, so I'll just say...

Good job. Keep it up!

[Azaxx 111]

The only bit of advice I have for you is to make sure your curves and straights don't have dents or bulges. That would require you to zoom in close to finely edit each line, but it would make a flawless result at the end.

As for my opinion, I think you did a fine job.

[♥.:Yulaiyre:.♥ 290]

it's pretty cool. I like it. 

 

I do like those styles of poni drawings. My advice would be to clean it up a bit more so the lines are more defined. what program are you using? and are you using a tablet?

[SwigglySwiggly 358]

The block lines are because of image size and pixel limitations. If he used MSPaint then it makes sense why the lines are blocky.

MSPaint is not a powerful program, If he used inkscape (or any vector programs) then there will be no blocky lines Photoshop will have high amount of pixels so blocky lines are not a problem. If your drawing with a mouse then that will also make your lines blocky.

The blocky lines aren't his fault. But if you want to make your lines not pixelated, I recommend you get a Drawing Tablet

(about $100-200) and a strong program like photoshop ($???).

But overall Good Drawing

[Friendship_Cannon 1,677]

It´s pretty pretty.

I liek this new style coming up (chibi or what was it called, idk, you know what I mean, do you?).

Makes it look really cute, but what is with the wings, they look a bit... robotic? No, I just don´t know, don´t get mad, but... huh?

[TheStareMaster 45]

I think it is really good! I've always liked that style of pony heres mine:

I like the way you did the wings best. I think the only improvement would be to try and make the mane and tail slightly smoother

[MidnightBlue 51]

it's pretty cool. I like it. 

 

I do like those styles of poni drawings. My advice would be to clean it up a bit more so the lines are more defined. what program are you using? and are you using a tablet?

I am using a tablet PC from my school, and I am using GIMP for the program itself. Thanks for the feedback!

 

It´s pretty pretty.

I liek this new style coming up (chibi or what was it called, idk, you know what I mean, do you?).

Makes it look really cute, but what is with the wings, they look a bit... robotic? No, I just don´t know, don´t get mad, but... huh?

The wings were meant to look robotic. My OC was originally an earth pony, but constructed wings for himself. Thanks for the feedback! 

 

I drew Derpy. I tried to spend some extra time to make sure that the edges were more straight. What do you guys think? Again, please give some feedback.