visual art Rainbow Dash as a Human

[SuperFlapjack 32]

Hey guys gotta make this quick cause I wanna go do some more drawing so I'll just get on with it, so I drew RainbowDash as a human and I wanted you're input, tell me whats good about it and whats bad about it, here it is:

 

 

If that pic didn't work for ya heres the link to the page:

http://s1294.photobucket.com/user/SuperFlapjack1/media/RainbowdashscannedintocomputerGraphicallycoloured_zpsce97b9a1.png.html?sort=3&o=0

 

Critique is welcomed! see ya later! byee!

 

 

Sorry guys I know I said I needed to make it quick but a brohoof already, like not even a minute after the enitial post, thanks!

[SuperFlapjack 32]

Seriously no one wants to comment aww cause I really need critique so I can get better ya know It would also be nice to be commented on some good things too

[Budding Night 1,043]

I'm here to comment, do not worry!

 

I quite like how you did Rainbow Dash, I haven't seen as of yet a Human Rainbow Dash with that sort of hair, I actually quite like it.

The Rainbow behind her is nice aswell, but looks a tad strange to me, but only because the colours don't seem to be in order.

 

The things I liked about this piece of art is how you took it differently to what artists usually do or the Equestrian Girls style, you have your own style and I think it looks really nice how you draw Human-Ponies.

The things I don't really like about it is how the arms don't look the same length and one wing is bigger than the other.

 

That is all

[Ruhisu 1,134]

I see that we both dedided to open similar topics.

I'm planning also to draw my own human Rainbow Dash but there ale still some aspects I have to consider.

For example RD is a typical tomboy so for sure she can't be busty as for example my human Luna but I don't want her to be flat-chested as well.

Hair probably will be similar to her mane style but what I'm still thinking about is her face. Usually when it comes to manga I've been drawing more lovely and juicy faces but perfaps she could have a face similar to one of my characters - Nayuki: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/236/2/b/nayuki_masaki___age_19_ver_2_by_ruhisu-d5c8m5t.png

Or maybe Ayane - http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/271/c/5/nagasarete_airantou___ayane_kanzaki_by_ruhisu-d5g6029.png

 when I think about it, the short hair version on the right side could serve as a good base for Human Rainbow Dash... who knows, maybe I should give it a try .

 

About your version, it reminds me a bit a tyle I saw in Powerpuff girls and it's quite challenging to comment.

But you gave me a few nice ideas for the dress

Right now I know that I will base my RD on your drawing so thanks a lot

[SuperFlapjack 32]

@Ruhisu

Aww thanks and I look forward to seeing your version too, make sure you post a link to the thread or something!

 

@Budding Night

I see what you mean about one of the wings being bigger than the other, she'll end up flying in circles all the time   also see where you're coming from about the order of the colours in her mane/hair, but this is my style and I wouldn't change it for the world, acctually I might cahnge it for the world it depends

 

anyways thanks for the critique and the good stuff, really appreciate it

[Ruhisu 1,134]

Sure thing, here is the topic with Dashie already included

I will include some background by next day

 

http://mlpforums.com/topic/62456-masaki-art-goes-mlp-human-luna/

[SuperFlapjack 32]

I LOVE your rainbow dash as a human, it's like 20% cooler than mine, but I'm guessing your older than me, I don't think anyone my age could draw something as good as that (yours) but maybe they could, I dunno! Anyways before any pony asks I'm not telling my age

EDIT: ooh almost forgot, I'm now taking requests, so if you've got a HUMAN OC or a pony in particular you'd like me to draw, go to this thread:

http://mlpforums.com/topic/62361-superflapjack-drawing-requests-humans/

EDIT, EDIT: What I meant by pony was an MLP: FIM Character as a human so yeah I was just saying in case any-pony was confused

[Ruhisu 1,134]

It's only the matter of practise

When I began drawing manga, it all looked so silly but since I love drawing I wanted to improve and today you can see the effects

[Mr. Jaguar 1,403]

Alright, I hope you really are open to criticism, because here goes:

 

Basically you're problem is proportions, lines, just the way it all looks in general. It looks as if you're using paint program to do art, I personally wouldn't do that, I'm not saying good art can't be done through paint program, but I just wouldn't personally. I have no advice if you want to learn how to do real painting art, but if you want to draw, I do. let's start with easy art, basically like MLP:FIM's artstyle: Use a normal HB pencil, and have a reference to try and replicate as best you can, you don't need to do 100% accuracy, but what you want is to AT LEAST have a hard time seeing the difference between your version and the original. Try this:

 

 

Draw it over and over until you manage to borderline 100% replicate this reference, till you can barely tell the difference between yours and the original, do that and then post your result, then I guess we'll move on to something harder. And when I say replicate, I mean ever last little insignificant detail, in this case since there's not really any minor details that could be left out and not make too much of a difference.

Edited June 4, 2013 by Mr. Jaguar

[SuperFlapjack 32]

Um I might do that some time but I don't really have time right now, I understand what you mean about proportions, but I guess thats just the way I draw! anyways thanks