Can someone judge this

[Rascal~ 657]

Hello everypony, I just want some feed back on this thing right here

This was the first signature I did and I was wondering if I should use it for my sig... but I know it needs improvements , so this is where you guys come in

 

Can you please tell me anything, you like it, you don't like it, what I need to do to make it look better, what I could've done... all that kind of stuff, please

 

Thank you so much guys for helping me out

[Jokuc 8,174]

Well firstly the background looks like it is a bit low quality, try finding a similar image with higher quality.

You could google search for flames or something like that and then change the hues of the red flames in any image editing program.

 

The cutout of this drawing could have been done better since it still has these white spots around it.

 

 

These two could easily have been vectorized, which would make them look much better on the signature. If you look at the chest on the one to the left you can see that the line is all.. wobbly

Edited June 6, 2013 by Jokuc

[Ģōffēŗmąʼn99 5]

Guilty!, no i kidding, but its really good and well drawn although i see a bit of noise around the middle pony.

[Quilava 1,290]

*Sorry if I come off as picky here, just a bit critical :3*

 

 The overall concept is pretty solid, however, the positioning of the three images could be reworked a bit. To me, they just feel out of place/placed randomly. The image on the right would be/could be probably more transparent and a bit bigger (if possible) to blend into the background. In my opinion, if an/the image in question is unfinished (only showing a certain part, in this case, the head) you'll usually want it to end/cut off on an edge of the boarder)

 

 Also, I'm not totally sure, but the image on the right seems to be stretched horizontally. If it is, you never want to break an image's aspect ratio.

 

 As for the centre-most image, if you used a magic wand (or magic wand variant from Paint.NET/GIMP/etc.) you're going to want to up t he tolerance of the wand to get rid of the straggly pixels. May take some experimentation to get it right, but the end result it worth it. I would also agree with @Jokuc about the green flames. However, I wouldn't discard them, I could see them being useful being used as an edit for the text to make it pop out a bit more.

 

Hopefully this helped you really sorry if I came off incredibly blunt*