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After hours of sampling, making drum patterns and waiting forever to upload, I present to you my greatest work yet! mlp-rcrazy.png

 

At least... That's how I feel. mlp-rcrown.png

 

 

http://soundcloud.com/aesu/delegation-ftw

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"I keep the walking on the right side, but I won't judge the next who handles walking on the wrong. 'Cause that's how he wants to be. No difference, see."

 

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00:15 Hoo!-Yeah!   (omg omg omg ive been wanting that sample for yeeeeeaaarrrsssss pleeeeaaase let me have it)
01:01 That was a sudden transition to something that although good, didn't feel like you were building up to.

01:16 That piano... my ears tell me it's just not working. The chord and the negative impression gives doesn't mesh the warmth of the drums or bass.

01:28 that guitar chord sample would work well with the intro the song.
01:31 there wasn't a need to change the drumbeat at all

by 2:20 I had enough.
I can totally see what you were aiming for but I think if you waited a few days and then listened to it again it will refresh your perspective.


For I have saved your soul in the heavens, and now save it on the ground. - TwilighCelunaCircuits

 

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00:15 Hoo!-Yeah!   (omg omg omg ive been wanting that sample for yeeeeeaaarrrsssss pleeeeaaase let me have it)

01:01 That was a sudden transition to something that although good, didn't feel like you were building up to.

01:16 That piano... my ears tell me it's just not working. The chord and the negative impression gives doesn't mesh the warmth of the drums or bass.

01:28 that guitar chord sample would work well with the intro the song.

01:31 there wasn't a need to change the drumbeat at all

by 2:20 I had enough.

I can totally see what you were aiming for but I think if you waited a few days and then listened to it again it will refresh your perspective.

 

Gosh, dang it. I knew there was something bad about it. Too long and repetitive. Even when I try, it sucks. sleep.png

 

Here's the Woo! Yeah! sample. http://www.junglebreaks.co.uk/breaks/think--all5.wav

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"I keep the walking on the right side, but I won't judge the next who handles walking on the wrong. 'Cause that's how he wants to be. No difference, see."

 

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Gosh, dang it. I knew there was something bad about it. Too long and repetitive. Even when I try, it sucks. sleep.png

 

Here's the Woo! Yeah! sample. http://www.junglebreaks.co.uk/breaks/think--all5.wav

omg thanks for the sample! Tell you what, not sure how many samples you used but if you wanted to upload them I'll throw something together. It would be a neat perspective for you to be able to see what someone else does with them. I also kinda think it would be fun too. What do ya say?


For I have saved your soul in the heavens, and now save it on the ground. - TwilighCelunaCircuits

 

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omg thanks for the sample! Tell you what, not sure how many samples you used but if you wanted to upload them I'll throw something together. It would be a neat perspective for you to be able to see what someone else does with them. I also kinda think it would be fun too. What do ya say?

 

Sure, why not...

 

Well now I feel like I should remove the song because it has so many issues. Now I hate it.


 

"I keep the walking on the right side, but I won't judge the next who handles walking on the wrong. 'Cause that's how he wants to be. No difference, see."

 

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I realize that you're aiming for a more club-ish track, but somewhere in the mix, certain samples/melodies don't fit with the key-signature. You should be careful about that, because it can make any song sound like crap, or even creepy. I do believe they're sample based? Perhaps you were aiming for French House? I've read your latest post, and that makes you sound absolutely unprofessional. Deleting a song just because you received honest critique? That's overreacting, in my opinion. You need to accept any critique you can get, no matter negative or positive.

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Sure, why not...

 

Well now I feel like I should remove the song because it has so many issues. Now I hate it.

Dont' feel bad man, it's how you get better. Take my song for example: https://pony.fm/tracks/137-twilightcircuits-melancholic-memory

 

I know it isn't pro work nor do i expect it to reach the chart toppers but I also realise i don't have all the things I feel i need to make it even better. There's parts where there's too many bars and the piano i had could used a couple more different note hits in the bar. Not only that, it wasn't even close to the kind of song I was originally intending to create. Hell, take a look at the video in my profile. I know the sound is out of synch and people have said there's too much echo but I i know absolute zip about video editing. But the point is that i had a vision and goal and still stuck through it to finally come out with the video after two months of work only to have no one comment on it at all. But music i've dabbled in since i was a teen and although i can't play live at a gig or anything i did learn from listening to how music does things like intro's and breaks and the like. Long enough and you can't help but slowly get better.  Ask any major label artist and you find  they themselve will say it can take as long as two months work everyday just to make a single song.

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For I have saved your soul in the heavens, and now save it on the ground. - TwilighCelunaCircuits

 

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I realize that you're aiming for a more club-ish track, but somewhere in the mix, certain samples/melodies don't fit with the key-signature. You should be careful about that, because it can make any song sound like crap, or even creepy. I do believe they're sample based? Perhaps you were aiming for French House? I've read your latest post, and that makes you sound absolutely unprofessional. Deleting a song just because you received honest critique? That's overreacting, in my opinion. You need to accept any critique you can get, no matter negative or positive.

 

I guess you're right. I shouldn't whine when someone's trying to help me.

 

But, and not to sound like a dick, I wasn't really asking for advice or critique in the first place. I think i'll fix my problems in my songs with my own judgement.

 

And not to sound like an even bigger dick, but you have a radically different style and approach to House than I do, so what would seem bad to you wouldn't to someone who knows a lot about how French House works.

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"I keep the walking on the right side, but I won't judge the next who handles walking on the wrong. 'Cause that's how he wants to be. No difference, see."

 

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And not to sound like an even bigger dick, but you have a radically different style and approach to House than I do, so what would seem bad to you wouldn't to someone who knows a lot about how French House works.

First off, there's such a thing as listening to different genres, but not producing them. I've listened to quite a few French House, specifically Daft Punk and Silva Hound. I may not be familiar with the genre, but I understand how it works. I myself have produced one French House track. It's no where near the best, but it does the job.

 

But, and not to sound like a dick, I wasn't really asking for advice or critique in the first place. I think i'll fix my problems in my songs with my own judgement.

Another mistake, in my opinion. When you produce a track, you're under constant bias. You care too much about your original work that you ignore many big things that require tweaks. 

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First off, there's such a thing as listening to different genres, but not producing them. I've listened to quite a few French House, specifically Daft Punk and Silva Hound. I may not be familiar with the genre, but I understand how it works. I myself have produced one French House track. It's no where near the best, but it does the job.

 

Another mistake, in my opinion. When you produce a track, you're under constant bias. You care too much about your original work that you ignore many big things that require tweaks. 

 

Great, there I go again making myself look stupid.

 

Listen, can we please just stop talking about this? I already embarrassed myself enough for one day.


 

"I keep the walking on the right side, but I won't judge the next who handles walking on the wrong. 'Cause that's how he wants to be. No difference, see."

 

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I for one really like this song a lot! It sounds very nice and flows smoothly. Right when one peice starts to sound repetitve you added something in to make it more interesting.


I am not creative so... Battlefield

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