My first shot at progressive, how did I do?

[Level3rd 128]

This was the result of me experimenting around with the progressive, somewhat house genre.

How did I do??

Looking for some feedback, any and all comments are welcome.

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

I think the background sound (0:10-1:50) that plays doesn't sound that good it's too intruding.  All in all it's a good track.  Very nice!

[Level3rd 128]

As in the metal tick sound?  I can see that.  I made it to be a bit of an ambient percussion, but until the compressors take over, I can see how it could be intrusive.  I'll keep that in mind.  Thank you!

[longgone 873]

Am I the only one that thought of this when I saw the title O_O?:

 

 

 

 

But on topic:

 

Pretty good, get's really good around the three minute mark. Though if you're looking for some heavy critic that person is...not me, I know nothing about these...what are they? "Dub...steps?"

[Level3rd 128]

Am I the only one that thought of this when I saw the title O_O?:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LOL!

 

That works I suppose, not quite what I had in mind, but I can see where you get that from  

I like that part too, everybody loves classic gangster sirens.

Nah, this isn't dubstep, I'm really not a fan of dubstep.  In my mind, I see this as more or less something ambient you'd play at a bar or small nightclub somewhere.  Definitely not Nightclub material.