Derpy-Crash

[error-man 10]

Hey guy's!... 
Just wanted to share this picture, I did a while ago, with you. Because you're all awesome 
So tell me what you think of it. All the people I have shown it to are just saying it looks great. But I'm looking for some feedback in the form of "constructive criticism" So please don't hold back, I'm a big boy, and can take it

Edited June 19, 2013 by Artemis

[Alex Kennedy 1,228]

First of all, I have no artistic ability and really am in no way qualified to critique your art at all. Having said that, I'll try my best anyway. 

 

The only things that really occur to me are that Derpy's eyes seem a little bit too.... derped, I guess, and her whole face looks almost menacingly insane. Yeah... that's all I got.

[Mikestar 346]

It's kind of pale and hard to see, but I'll have a go.

 

I like the concept of it and the expressions so I'd say you've captured the mood of the moment well. That is the hardest thing for an artist to capture.

 

Trying to figure out where Derpy's mane is. I can see a little of it but if she's just crashed i would have expected it to be flowing out behind her a bit more.

 

the wings might be slightly far forward and her head not as round as I'm use to seeing but the back leg position and tail are awesome.

 

Mikestar.

[error-man 10]

Well that's a start atleast, thank you so for you guy's. And as for the "pale" thing... I draw in the hand, and don't have any of those fancy cheating tablets, so I can't really color them. But still thanks 

[Zygen 6,066]

Well overall it looks pretty good, btw who did derpy land on? Is that cadence or Rarity or what? I'm not totally sure, its hard to tell in black and white for me.

 

Derpy's eyes do look a bit messed up, i think they just need to be a bit less polar opposite of each others position idk. Something about it looks a bit to much.

 

Other then that I can't say anything for sure, good job overall .

[Mikestar 346]

 

 

Well that's a start atleast, thank you so for you guy's. And as for the "pale" thing... I draw in the hand, and don't have any of those fancy cheating tablets, so I can't really color them. But still thanks 

 

I actually do have one of those fancy tablet things and i find it really awkward to use... so I tend to go back to basics and use the pen till and my mouse which for some reason I seem to have a much steadier hand with. 

[Flarebrony 0]

Your idea it's so magnificent and your charactor pick don't get me started on that one its so great I wub it so much you need to do more more keep them coming

[DJShy 946]

That is a pretty good picture!

 

 

Things I like:

 

1. Detail
2. ponies are closely accurate.

 

Things I don't like:

 

1. Lack of color.

 

All in all, though, it is a good pic.