writing 10th Month (Hearts Breaking Part:1)

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

The end is so, as was always intended to be

That of the night which fades, etched in black, forever dark in eternal mourning

Of one moment in question, which was the epicenter of our pain, my dearest love

I knew so little, and was shown all too much my dear

 

Touched forever by grace in depth with lacking knowledge, the perfect end of forever

And with such a feat to overcome, all alone, born with no hope for a mother or a father

All alone now in the depths of a new hell, one of which we may remain separated, perhaps forever

Why did you succumb to the dark desire of illusions?

Always leaving me to realize in the scattered remains of my moral self, that our love was hopeless

 

Yet it seems that in these spirals of depressive absence, that the end was ot truly in vain

Even as my heart breaks, upon each and every beat, your memory suffices to calm the pain

Even when it is you who is the cause of that very pain, it seems, my dear

 

Always together: the promise that would never be kept

Never to hurt one another: the words that died when you dissapeared

 

-David Favret

 

23rd

 

 

[Zygen 6,066]

I haven't seen any of your poetry in a little bit, but its still very good I find . Good work with it David! Keep it up your great at what you do!

[Proton 565]

That was deeper than the bottomless pit the Titanic is stranded in. Much deeper than that. Kudos to you, David.

[Snowy Storm 57]

Wow you really wrote that!

My god, I wish I had you're talents, The flow of words and beauty with in ever word was just perfect.