Original Song! - Please Check It Out (:

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https://soundcloud.com/kaz-michael-smith/celestial-original

 

http://youtu.be/Wcy_LK3gs-I

 

UPDATED LINK, NEW RECORDING ^

 

 

 

I finally got around to recording this with my new microphone and I'm super pleased with how it turned out. I put the lyrics in a different thread but will include them here. I thought this needed a new topic as this is now the complete version (": (If a mod reads this, please delete or close the old topic)

 

 

Here's the album artwork:

 

 

Verse:

Late-bloom, 

Afternoon,

Small fright,

Midnight.

Early,

Morning,

Eye's closed,

Yawning.

The suuu-uuun is making its way,

Dancing in the sky,

And Luna-aahh is sound asleep,

To let her sister shine.

Pre-Chorus:

But we all shine

Chorus:

We will be Celestial-aall,

And we'll raise the sun for all,

Cause we will bring the moon down to these parts,

And eclipse the hate that's in those hearts,

And we will be Celestial-aall,

We raise our heads and stand up tall,

Celestial-aall, Ooh-ooh-ooooh-oh-oh-oh

 

Verse:

Only,

They see,

I'm alone,

No home.

Boldy,

Bravely,

Closely,

They speak.

A ra-aainbow is arching up there,

Dashed against the sky,

And the twilight is on it's way,

To bring back the night.

Pre-Chorus:

But we'll still shine

Chorus:

We will be Celestial-aall,

And we'll raise the sun for all,

Cause we will bring the moon down to these parts,

And eclipse the hate that's in those hearts,

And we will be Celestial-aall,

We raise our heads and stand up tall,

Celestial-aall, Ooh-ooh-ooooh-oh-oh-oh

Bridge:

We all shine,

We all shine,

We all shine,

We all shine,

We all shine,

We all shine,

We all shine,

Shine (hold).

Pre-Chorus:

We will be Celestial-aall (hold).

Chorus:

Cause we are all Celestial-aall,

And we raise the sun for all,

Yeah we bring the moon down to these parts,

And eclipse the hate that's in those hearts,

Cause we are all Celestial-all,

We've raised our heads and stood up tall,

Celestial-aall, Ooh-ooh-ooooh-oh-oh-oh

Edited August 1, 2013 by Kaz

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

This is pretty great.  I really like the chorus, it's very catchy.  The vocals could use some reverb, but other then that it's very good.  

[MLPForums Phanact 1,374]

Luckily, I've actually saved the Audacity project files so I could go back and add some Reverb. I might re-do the vocals again tomorrow and try to cut back on the vibrato/tremolo but IDK how successful I will be as it's something I don't even think about, It just happens.

Thanks for the compliments though! :3

EDIT: This song is now licensed with Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike CC BY-NC-SA SO PLEASE FEEL FREE TO EDIT THIS, REMIX IT, CHANGE IT ETC. BUT SHARE WITH ATTRIBUTION AND UNDER THE SAME LICENSE <3

Edited July 27, 2013 by Kaz

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I'VE MADE AN UPDATED VERSION! I don't know if this will bump my topic back to the top for people to see but oh well! I'm going to update the main post now :3