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House Stormwing I give the second and final approval to the character North Arrow

Uncertain Bounderies I give the second and final approval to the character Cascade Swirl

 

Jolly good, jolly good.

 

 

Appropriate Avatar pic is appropriate.

I actually picked it deliberately.

 

That's why we have The Inquisition. Also we promise they will be set free eventually, depending on different things. But, once they serve their use, we say they'll be free, but we really just lock them up for experiments. Hahahaha! Plus we also make them believe in different crap and break their minds and torture and all sorts of good stuff to keep them in line.

I suppose that 'indentured servants' may be slightly more accurate than slaves, in that context? Except for the part where they're not actually set free.


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Cartophile, on 18 Oct 2013 - 5:13 PM, said:

Both are edited.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/blueprint-r4673

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/astrolabeαστρολάβος-r4620

 

For the X-ray, it is somewhat possible to create one today, though you do have a point; they may not have the technology back then – I'm assuming early 20th century technology – to easily create an X-ray machine, since they may have lacked proper materials to do so. I have deleted that.

 

Also, an edit: Asphodel City is now Coasttown in this universe. It's east of Hoofington.

Actually wasn't so much the name of the city then the fact that it involves legendary deities that came before the royal sisters in this setting. There are no deities and though House Moon and Star may consider Celestia and Luna to be such they are not.
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Alright, Lila's bio is update with two new sections. One for the kingdom's map location and relationship with Equestria and Lila's personal views on the country. Let me know if more needs to be done.


"And with a sigh, she closed the old dusty book and set it gently back on its self. Wishing for a better day to come tomorrow. So that today can be forgotten and lost in the memories of that book..."

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/cadence-r2169 -Cadence (Little Hop)

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lila-fireheart-r2356 -Lila Fireheart: The queen of FallenMoon
http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/flash-note-r5473 -Flash Note: Silent, sweet, and explosive....

 

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Actually wasn't so much the name of the city then the fact that it involves legendary deities that came before the royal sisters in this setting. There are no deities and though House Moon and Star may consider Celestia and Luna to be such they are not.

 

Well, it isn't accounted to the universe since the name is changed, and therefore the entire backstory of her origins. 

 

 

That's why we have The Inquisition. Also we promise they will be set free eventually, depending on different things. But, once they serve their use, we say they'll be free, but we really just lock them up for experiments. Hahahaha! Plus we also make them believe in different crap and break their minds and torture and all sorts of good stuff to keep them in line.

 

Still opens the problem and probably make it even worse. If information leaks to the slaves, then they will have little hesitation to rebel – but in the best case scenario, these slaves might as well have been treated as indentured servants who gets their promised "freedom". 

 

Plus, other houses would probably even try to help the slaves, such as giving them weapons of destruction and such.

 

Their best way to create minimal disorder is that they have to totally regulate the camps and decently treat them inside a heavily guarded area.

 

Wait. Moon and Star is starting to sound like Nazi Germany... Experiments? Slave camps? Torturing and execution of slaves? Any of that ring a bell? **cough cough Auschwitz Concentration Camp cough cough**

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Wait. Moon and Star is starting to sound like Nazi Germany... Experiments? Slave camps? Torturing and execution of slaves? Any of that ring a bell? **cough cough Auschwitz Concentration Camp cough cough**

... You just realized that? I know of our similarities. A lot of the houses are similar to many things. Especially Moon and Star. 

 

Also I like how you think the slaves will rebel. You certainly are underestimating me and over estimating the slaves. Besides having them not rebel is mainly for the story. 

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... You just realized that? I know of our similarities. A lot of the houses are similar to many things. Especially Moon and Star. 

 

Also I like how you think the slaves will rebel. You certainly are underestimating me and over estimating the slaves. Besides having them not rebel is mainly for the story. 

No, I already thought about that at least a week before. Their government is more like the U.K, but they literally act like the Nazis. OR if you don't like to talk about Nazi Germany, then the " People's Republic" of China. (Not just Republic. That will be Taiwan.)

 

Plus, not having them defy the house would also be underestimating the slaves itself. You would have thought that a small number of them know what the Moon and Star is REALLY doing while they're killing off and experimenting several hundreds of thousands of ponies. 

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Wait. Moon and Star is starting to sound like Nazi Germany... Experiments? Slave camps? Torturing and execution of slaves? Any of that ring a bell? **cough cough Auschwitz Concentration Camp cough cough**

I didn't think it required much thought, but yes. And while we're at it, we can also add that they share similarities with fundamentalism and the Thought police from 1984.

 

I can also compare the Cult and Aum Shinrikyo with eachother.

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(PSSST...ITS ME!)
This is rather embarrassing...again...

Yep, I just cant make up my mind. My friend convinced me to come back, plus I've started working on some of the stuff that was keeping me away.
I may join again...because allot of my friends have rejoined this RP so its made me all interested again.

If I did join, I'd be Wind, and one new character, and that'd be eet.

 

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No, I already thought about that at least a week before. Their government is more like the U.K, but they literally act like the Nazis. OR if you don't like to talk about Nazi Germany, then the " People's Republic" of China. (Not just Republic. That will be Taiwan.)

 

Plus, not having them defy the house would also be underestimating the slaves itself. You would have thought that a small number of them know what the Moon and Star is REALLY doing while they're killing off and experimenting several hundreds of thousands of ponies. 

Heheheh, oh my dear you make it seem like I haven't covered all the bases. You make it seem like I would make it possible for them to rebel, for them to think straight, for them to even know what is happening outside their dirty tenements. Oh and even if they could think and realize something, then what hm? You'd think they fight back? Do you REALLY think that? Do you really think they stand a chance? do you even think they are even willing? The ponies who have tortured and have see their brothers and sisters heads cut off before their eyes and stuck on wooden stacks to show what would happen to them? The ponies who have seen their own parents and children killed and maimed right before their very eyes? Do you really think they want to fight back and have that happen to them? Fight back with just simple hoes and shovels and picks? Fight back while they have a better chance at living if they didn't? They don't even have the moral, and nopony will give it to them. If anypony even thinks of rebellion they will have to think about it with the Inquisition clipping their wings off or brainwashing them. 

 

Resistance is futile. *cue maniacal laughter* 

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I don't mean to be "That person" But, is the information on here crucial? I don't mind reading it all, I was just curious. I also just wanted to remind everyone I'm still game for this RP, I haven't gone anywhere :)

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(PSSST...ITS ME!)

This is rather embarrassing...again...

Yep, I just cant make up my mind. My friend convinced me to come back, plus I've started working on some of the stuff that was keeping me away.

I may join again...because allot of my friends have rejoined this RP so its made me all interested again.

 

If I did join, I'd be Wind, and one new character, and that'd be eet.

 

((Please don't hate me for all the times I have left "For Good" blush.png ((It's Fire Sky by the way))))

...

 

Cult kinda getting full, as much as I'd love Wind to be in the RP(for... obvious reason we aren't allowed to say) ... I'm not sure, technically its not closed but, 6 cult members... damn Thunder better be one helluva mod if hes going to handle six OC's.

 

I'm not sure what to say, up to Thunder and Scholar really...

I don't mean to be "That person" But, is the information on here crucial? I don't mind reading it all, I was just curious. I also just wanted to remind everyone I'm still game for this RP, I haven't gone anywhere smile.png

We are just talking a lot so no its not lol. Scholar did say something about Tarot but I suppose he PMed you so i guess that taken care of.

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Cult kinda getting full, as much as I'd love Wind to be in the RP(for... obvious reason we aren't allowed to say) ... I'm not sure, technically its not closed but, 6 cult members... damn Thunder better be one helluva mod if hes going to handle six OC's.   I'm not sure what to say, up to Thunder and Scholar really...

 

If it is full, its all good.

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Hmmmmm, I dont think I got a pm, but perhaps it was nothing important :) I noticed she's been added so thats all that really matters :)

I'm excited to get started!

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If it is full, its all good.

I also forgot to say that I'm totally gonna join in with The Musician again...he was a fun character...if I can. Up to scholar, I'll talk to him...

Eeyup.

Well.... Seeing as Sonic probably isn't gonna join us... There might actually be four characters in the Cult... meaning one Spot left. Unless I'm forgetting someone. Technically there are three characters in it, but Thunder reserved a spot. I think Wind can still join. Though this means we probably shouldn't add more Cultists... Though i might be forgetting someone...

 

wait... Oh Cascade! Ohh... Oooooh Technically she is neutral... Dezzy (Descant) was thinking of putting her in the Cult, though I think he decided not too. So yeah I think she can join. 

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I didn't think it required much thought, but yes. And while we're at it, we can also add that they share similarities with fundamentalism and the Thought police from 1984.

 

I can also compare the Cult and Aum Shinrikyo with eachother.

Funny. I'm reading Orwell's Down and Out in Paris and London. 

 

 

 

Heheheh, oh my dear you make it seem like I haven't covered all the bases. You make it seem like I would make it possible for them to rebel, for them to think straight, for them to even know what is happening outside their dirty tenements. Oh and even if they could think and realize something, then what hm? You'd think they fight back? Do you REALLY think that? Do you really think they stand a chance? do you even think they are even willing? The ponies who have tortured and have see their brothers and sisters heads cut off before their eyes and stuck on wooden stacks to show what would happen to them? The ponies who have seen their own parents and children killed and maimed right before their very eyes? Do you really think they want to fight back and have that happen to them? Fight back with just simple hoes and shovels and picks? Fight back while they have a better chance at living if they didn't? They don't even have the moral, and nopony will give it to them. If anypony even thinks of rebellion they will have to think about it with the Inquisition clipping their wings off or brainwashing them. 

 

Resistance is futile. *cue maniacal laughter* 

 

Still, you're going to get one pony that's going to think different. Kind of like Nat Turner before the American Civil War, or the slaves in the Creole during 1841. (Though I don't think I should exactly count the latter, since it wasn't as violent as the former.)

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Hmmmmm, I dont think I got a pm, but perhaps it was nothing important smile.png I noticed she's been added so thats all that really matters smile.png

I'm excited to get started!

Here his comment:

 

"Since House Earthborn did not exist when she was born I would suggest turning it back into a gypsy camp with perhaps later the whole gypsy camp joining House Earthborn, and also add in how the Princesses/rise of the Houses effected Tarot and her family. All in all I would suggest more detail, and if you can add this details/make these changes I believe I will be able to give your character a second approval."

 

I didn't notice this problem though. Maybe i just didn't notice you characters age. But change what you can.

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Okay, thank you very much, I appreciate it! I must have missed over it when I had a bunch of notifications, I'll get right on that :)

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Well.... Seeing as Sonic probably isn't gonna join us... There might actually be four characters in the Cult... meaning one Spot left. Unless I'm forgetting someone. Technically there are three characters in it, but Thunder reserved a spot. I think Wind can still join. Though this means we probably shouldn't add more Cultists... Though i might be forgetting someone...

 

wait... Oh Cascade! Ohh... Oooooh Technically she is neutral... Dezzy (Descant) was thinking of putting her in the Cult, though I think he decided not too. So yeah I think she can join. 

 

Awesome sauce.

I shall edit my characters and shtuff and talk to Scholar when he gets back.


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Okay, thank you very much, I appreciate it! I must have missed over it when I had a bunch of notifications, I'll get right on that smile.png

Oh yeah she was born two years before the wars began. I can't believe I didn't notice that. Huh. So yeah her family would of been affected by the Sister disappearing. I don't remember her original bio but if her family were gypsies then they would be gypsies when the Sisters disappeared and probably eventually assimilate into House Earthborn.

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Yep...hi...
I was hoping to rejoin with Wind and a new character.....

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/crystal-fire-r4711 (The edit is at the bottom for her backstory and all that)

 

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/redbloodcannibal-wind-r2348 (Here's Wind. I maaaaaaay change her from a euphorie to a Harle-Equine...which would you prefer?)


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I did a few more touch ups on Tarot, sorry I didn't get to it earlier. Again, please let me know if theres anything you want added or changed and i'll be happy to do so!

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@@EquestrianScholar,

 

 

Yep...hi...

I was hoping to rejoin with Wind and a new character.....

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/crystal-fire-r4711 (The edit is at the bottom for her backstory and all that)

 

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/redbloodcannibal-wind-r2348 (Here's Wind. I maaaaaaay change her from a euphorie to a Harle-Equine...which would you prefer?)

Whats the difference between a Harle-Equine and a Euphorie? Isn't one a Pegasus and one not or something? 

 

Wind doesn't seem bad, but I still don't understand the multiple name thing. And I'm not sure if Scholar wants more detail but it seems fine to me.

 

As for Crystal, I'm sorry but I only read one sentence and knew there was an issue. The Crystal Empire is not in this in this setting.

 

I read more of it, it seems fine though I do have to question her father ability to cast such a spell. But considering he also train her in magic he could of been a fairly good mage which could explain the spell. Though i still am a bit confused on her 'side effects' and that Scarf. Perhaps you can expand on that? What do you mean shes 'cold to the touch?' And does she need to be wearing that scarf to cast fire magic? expand her her abilities and this 'gift/curse' of hers. But th actual backstory seems fine. 

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Whats the difference between a Harle-Equine and a Euphorie? Isn't one a Pegasus and one not or something? 

 

Wind doesn't seem bad, but I still don't understand the multiple name thing. And I'm not sure if Scholar wants more detail but it seems fine to me.

 

As for Crystal, I'm sorry but I only read one sentence and knew there was an issue. The Crystal Empire is not in this in this setting.

 

I read more of it, it seems fine though I do have to question her father ability to cast such a spell. But considering he also train her in magic he could of been a fairly good mage which could explain the spell. Though i still am a bit confused on her 'side effects' and that Scarf. Perhaps you can expand on that? What do you mean shes 'cold to the touch?' And does she need to be wearing that scarf to cast fire magic? expand her her abilities and this 'gift/curse' of hers. But th actual backstory seems fine. 

 

By cold to the touch...I mean if you touch her...she is cold...feeling...not warm.

I'll write up a little explanation to her scarf at the bottom.

 

Okay, her thing has been edited.

 

 

Also, the Euphories are hyped up on drugs to make them...crazy. The Harle-Equine are a bunch of (Also crazy) unicycle riding soldiers who are crazy acrobatic.

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By cold to the touch...I mean if you touch her...she is cold...feeling...not warm.

I'll write up a little explanation to her scarf at the bottom.

 

Okay, her thing has been edited.

 

 

Also, the Euphories are hyped up on drugs to make them...crazy. The Harle-Equine are a bunch of (Also crazy) unicycle riding soldiers who are crazy acrobatic.

Hmmm Ok then I'll approve the for now, though that does mean much since Scholar is still gonna look over it. But you can at least consider yourself guaranteed to be in the RP.

 

Also since Wind likes flying and is a pegasus, I guess she should continue being a Euphorie, but that's my opinion. 

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