ooc Equestia Divided Reboot

[Cerise Hood 102]

Interested in joining, any space left? I would like to be in the house of Whitegold.

 

Also, how would you like me to send my pony's to you? Also, I understand if you don't accept, her bio is a little... Different.

[AnonBrony 1,468]

Interested in joining, any space left? I would like to be in the house of Whitegold.

 

Also, how would you like me to send my pony's to you? Also, I understand if you don't accept, her bio is a little... Different.

Oh there is certainly still space especially in Whitegold. Just put the link to her bio.

And don't worry if it isn't good enough. We allow people to make changes if they aren't approved right away.

[Cerise Hood 102]

Oh there is certainly still space especially in Whitegold. Just put the link to her bio.

And don't worry if it isn't good enough. We allow people to make changes if they aren't approved right away.

The thing is, I don't have a link. My character was not made specifically for this RP, so I'm writing a alternative backstory. Should I PM it to you or something?

[AnonBrony 1,468]

The thing is, I don't have a link. My character was not made specifically for this RP, so I'm writing a alternative backstory. Should I PM it to you or something?

Just put the alternate backstory in the "Other" section of your characters bio. That's what many did. Then provide us the link.

[Descant 1,897]

Sorry I haven't been on at all today, guys. My jerks that I call friends kept me awake until 8:00 this morning. Anywho... I've just put through my full application to be Everfree Storyteller. I think I did a good job with my stuff. 

 

wait... Oh Cascade! Ohh... Oooooh Technically she is neutral... Dezzy (Descant) was thinking of putting her in the Cult, though I think he decided not too. So yeah I think she can join. 

I actually haven't decided yet. I'm honestly still leaning towards the Cult, although she is neutral... But my decisions don't matter. She has Cult leanings, but I have stated that she still is independent and could be swayed into one of the other Houses at this point. It's what happens in the RP that matters at this point. If somepony from one of the other Houses doesn't show up and claim her, she's going straight into the Cult's waiting arms.

[AnonBrony 1,468]

Sorry I haven't been on at all today, guys. My jerks that I call friends kept me awake until 8:00 this morning. Anywho... I've just put through my full application to be Everfree Storyteller. I think I did a good job with my stuff. 

 

I actually haven't decided yet. I'm honestly still leaning towards the Cult, although she is neutral... But my decisions don't matter. She has Cult leanings, but I have stated that she still is independent and could be swayed into one of the other Houses at this point. It's what happens in the RP that matters at this point. If somepony from one of the other Houses doesn't show up and claim her, she's going straight into the Cult's waiting arms.

Well as of now The Cult has four members and one reserved. Its kinda getting full. Maybe she can join Stormwing or Whitegold or Everfree. They need some lovin'. (You are the Storyteller for Everfree, so you can be that pony from the house that claims her heheh)

Edited October 20, 2013 by AnonBrony

[Miss Light Diamond 2,802]

Should I be sending Scholar a PM with my OC's?

 

Also...

I've made some changes in Winds thingy (Okay...one change)
I said that she's one of the higher ups in the cult (The head Euphorie...)

I don't think this'd change the story much apart from giving her more to do in the cult.
Just thought I'd throw that in there.

[Descant 1,897]

Should I be sending Scholar a PM with my OC's?

 

Also...

I've made some changes in Winds thingy (Okay...one change)

I said that she's one of the higher ups in the cult (The head Euphorie...)

I don't think this'd change the story much apart from giving her more to do in the cult.

Just thought I'd throw that in there.

I don't think so. Scholar's on when he's on, there's no getting around that. Anon's been approving OCs for him.

Well as of now The Cult has four members and one reserved. Its kinda getting full. Maybe she can join Stormwing or Whitegold or Everfree. They need some lovin'. (You are the Storyteller for Everfree, so you can be that pony from the house that claims her heheh)

Yeah, I suppose I could do that. I'm honestly not sure I want both Cascade and Evergreen put in the same house, though. Not sure Everfree would be able to put Cascade to much use. So far as I know, the only place her specific abilities could be used would be in Froggy Bottom Bog. And the answer to that? No. Just no. :/

 

I think that she'd be best put in Whitegold if the Cult isn't an option due to balancing. She's got a bit of a grudge against Stormwing, and besides, there's the whole spiel about not being any use as a flightless pegasus.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,802]

I don't think so. Scholar's on when he's on, there's no getting around that. Anon's been approving OCs for him.

Yeah, I suppose I could do that. I'm honestly not sure I want both Cascade and Evergreen put in the same house, though. Not sure Everfree would be able to put Cascade to much use. So far as I know, the only place her specific abilities could be used would be in Froggy Bottom Bog. And the answer to that? No. Just no. :/

 

I think that she'd be best put in Whitegold if the Cult isn't an option due to balancing. She's got a bit of a grudge against Stormwing, and besides, there's the whole spiel about not being any use as a flightless pegasus.

 

You could make her factionless.

Her and Crystal could meet and kick some serious arse.

[Cerise Hood 102]

Just put the alternate backstory in the "Other" section of your characters bio. That's what many did. Then provide us the link.

Alright, here is the link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-belle-r4493

PLEASE READ WHOLE THING BEFORE YOU JUDGE. Thank you.

[The-Master 1,176]

 

 

Alright, here is the link: http://mlpforums.com...tar-belle-r4493 PLEASE READ WHOLE THING BEFORE YOU JUDGE. Thank you.

 

 

I have a feeling that both Anon and Scholar are going to have some discrepancies over this. From what I've read your character may have issues fitting into the Equestria Divided setting, especially with a backstory that doesn't correspond with any kind of show canon or otherwise. I would request revising your character for the purposes of this RP or selecting another entirely. I'm not trying to be cynical, just making sure everything is fair and balanced.

[Descant 1,897]

Alright, here is the link: http://mlpforums.com...tar-belle-r4493

 

I'm afraid I'm going to have to agree full-heartedly with @@The-Master on this one. Unfortunately, a character whose story is so exceptionally unorthodox would have quite the difficult time fitting into many RPs, but especially one so selective as Equestria Divided. 

 

I could perhaps think of a few human-pony world crossover RPs that Star Belle might fit in cozily.

 

Personally, I would recommend giving your character some major revisions, if not selecting a different one for the sake of this roleplay. If you need a hand creating a character who can get in to this RP, I'd be happy to provide.

Edited October 20, 2013 by Dez

[AnonBrony 1,468]

Alright, here is the link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-belle-r4493

PLEASE READ WHOLE THING BEFORE YOU JUDGE. Thank you.

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Uhhhh... ... I'm sorry but... that was... something.... Uhhh I'm not normally I mean guy but I am honest so I'll be honest with you. That was terrible. It almost makes it seem like we take you and your life, give her magical powers which makes no sense at all, then she fights a monster for no sense and goes into Equestria which also makes no sense at all. Her opinions on the houses and stuff were the only thing I was fine with. Everything else has to be scrapped.

 

She can't be human. There are no humans in this. And she can't be a human who looks like a pony neither. She must be a pony, griffon, zebra, or maybe a deer. You are going to have to change the backstory completely. And don't just take the one you currently have a fix it a little so that she aint human. No.Rewrite it. Be creative and think of something. I can't really help you though or give you suggestions because I am basically saying, change her completely or create an entirely new OC just for this RP. Otherwise I can't let you in.

 

Just create a normal bio. She doesn't have to be an average hum-drum citizen but at least the bio has to make sense for this universe. My OC is a unicorn mage who's had a tragic life, spent most of it in solitude and seen the horrors of House Moon and Star. My other OC is suave Spanish pegasus stallion who was forced to move here because of complications in his homeland and now works as a mercenary for Whitegold. Archi's OC is an earthpony soldier for Earthborn who is an expert with gunpowder artillery. Those make sense. And Also provide a nice amount of detail. The bio should not make us ask 100 questions. 

Edited October 20, 2013 by AnonBrony

[GreyScholar 1,584]

I will go over more bios today, you should see a post later on.

[AnonBrony 1,468]

I will go over more bios today, you should see a post later on.

There are now some OC's that have recently been submitted so they are not on the list. Don't forget about those. I should probably update the list sometime soon.

 

@@EquestrianScholar, 

 

Also I looked at Golden Dawn just as you requested and there doesn't see to be any issues. Except Hollow Shades not being a town but I can assume the town probably went away when the Sisters disappeared and such. The bio is detailed and well done. Approved.

Edited October 20, 2013 by AnonBrony

[GreyScholar 1,584]

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On Crystal Fire is an interesting character and I feel you have covered all the points I have asked for, yet I feel that perhaps the scarf would be unnecessary once Crystal got out of the cold and could meet with a medical pony. You see neither pneumonia nor hypothermia (unless magical) is fatal if quickly and properly taken care of, and her father made sure she would not die from it and set it up for it to be taken care of later. With the scarf holding the effects of these issues at bay there would not be any reason that she couldn't be heal later on.

 

I will give a second approval as is but I will ask that you consider the fact that there would be ponies that could use healing magic to remove the effects and dangers of her pneumonia and hypothermia, thus making it so the scarf just has sentimental value and helps with her magic.

 

If I am missing something please tell me.

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On Red Wind

If you want her to be a Harle-Equine you may, though I agree with Anonbrony since your character is a pegasus that loves flying an Euphorie makes more sense. So I will ask that you explain and justify it if you her to be such. As is I would give my second approval, but if you want her to be a Harle-Equine I ask they you add to the bio to explain it.

 

@@Marathon

I give my second approval for Lila Fireheart

 

@@MagicalStarRain

Honestly I don't feel a list of single words work for personality, I would much rather you write it out as sentences.

On her as a spy I would say she and 'Mythos Gray' would get along quite well, especially since both have issue keeping their sense of self and working to not lose themselves... though for him he is helped/hindered when taking on alias because he uses his magic to do so.

 

If you can rewrite her personality to be sentences I will give my second approval.

 

@@Grand_Finale

I give my second approval for Tarot

 

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No, I will not allow dimensional travel in this setting. Twilight Sparkle and the Cult of Laughter are having a hard enough time piercing the barrier from their plane to another plane. There are no human turned pony in this setting, the only exception I would make is that of The Doctor who became Doctor Whooves (who is not a part of this roleplay). Lastly a pegasus cannot use magic, as in this world magic can only be directly tapped into with use of a horn... though I see you have it that she cannot use magic but that doesn't change everything else.

 

Seriously this is a character that I would not allow in any roleplay I make. No 'wizard from another dimension', no being able to hop between dimensions to visit Equestria, no having a character can do the Sonic Rainboom even if they don't use it so as not to show up Rainbow Dash, a pegasus cannot use unicorn magic, your character cannot be friends with the Mane Six or any other character from the show (without creating such a friendship during roleplay, a.k.a. earning it). Seriously, I don't mean to offend but this is a bad character, you should not make characters like this, this sort of character should be tossed.

 

I ask that you either rewrite your character or pick another character. If you need help or suggestions I am more then willing to do so.

 

@@SilverHeart

My only issue is how he was the leader of the guard, the most I would allow for him to be of equal rank to Shining Armour if not lesser rank (thus no more the 'a' captian of the guard).

In addition Shining Armour is now his superior in Equestria Divided.

Edited October 21, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[AnonBrony 1,468]

@@SilverHeart

My only issue is how he was the leader of the guard, the most I would allow for him to be of equal rank to Shining Armour if not lesser rank (thus no more the 'a' captian of the guard).

In addition Shining Armour is now his superior in Equestria Divided.

I noticed that when I read the bio but I'm not sure if he actually meant leader since he actually did say Shining was still his superior so yeah. I guessing he just meant a nice high ranking officer, but not captain.

[MagicalStarRain 599]

@@EquestrianScholar,

 

I did it, Scholar. I edited their personalities so that they're sentences.

 

Star Rain

 

North Shine

 

Ginseng 

[Descant 1,897]

I noticed that when I read the bio but I'm not sure if he actually meant leader since he actually did say Shining was still his superior so yeah. I guessing he just meant a nice high ranking officer, but not captain.

Isn't Shining Armor the Puppet Prince for Twilight now? Perhaps he handed the "Royal Guard Captain" position farther down when he was promoted. I'd imagine he's still superior to a "Royal Guard Captain" if he isn't still one, and would still meddle in Royal Guard affairs often.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,802]

 

 

On Crystal Fire is an interesting character and I feel you have covered all the points I have asked for, yet I feel that perhaps the scarf would be unnecessary once Crystal got out of the cold and could meet with a medical pony. You see neither pneumonia nor hypothermia (unless magical) is fatal if quickly and properly taken care of, and her father made sure she would not die from it and set it up for it to be taken care of later. With the scarf holding the effects of these issues at bay there would not be any reason that she couldn't be heal later on. I will give a second approval as is but I will ask that you consider the fact that there would be ponies that could use healing magic to remove the effects and dangers of her pneumonia and hypothermia, thus making it so the scarf just has sentimental value and helps with her magic. If I am missing something please tell me.

 

My mind has been kinda stuck on that. I was thinking of changing that so it was a magical ailment. That or (Since her father and her lived far away from...everywhere) Her father was unable to do anything except that. He couldn't heal her himself nor could he run her to a healer, so he used his magic to echant the scarf to stop the Pneumonia and Hypothermia but the downside to that was that she'd be stuck with each of the ailments (Without a cure) due to the spell.

Out of the two, which do you think would work better?

 

 

 

On Red Wind If you want her to be a Harle-Equine you may, though I agree with Anonbrony since your character is a pegasus that loves flying an Euphorie makes more sense. So I will ask that you explain and justify it if you her to be such. As is I would give my second approval, but if you want her to be a Harle-Equine I ask they you add to the bio to explain it.

 

I think I'll keep her as a Euphorie.
Is it alright if she is one of the higher ups in the cult? Because I didn't want her to be stuck with just wingblades, I wanted to make her more unique and give her something along with them or maybe something different entirely.

[AnonBrony 1,468]

Isn't Shining Armor the Puppet Prince for Twilight now? Perhaps he handed the "Royal Guard Captain" position farther down when he was promoted. I'd imagine he's still superior to a "Royal Guard Captain" if he isn't still one, and would still meddle in Royal Guard affairs often.

Yes hes the puppet King, but Silver's char, Snowy Fields, was a guard before the Sisters disappeared I believe. Thus Shinning was still captain of the guard then. Now Snowy is an Inquisition member. And Yes even though shinning is the (puppet) King he heads the military... somewhat.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

@@MagicalStarRain

Good then they're all approved

 

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Hmm, perhaps the second option can work and it would be able to allow you to keep your basic idea but when it comes to magic it can be somewhat argued whether or not there would be nothing that could be done to heal Crystal Fire.

If you had that explained somewhere I can give the second approval.

 

On Wind, if that's the case, I give the second approval. On your question you can have her be a squad leader of a Euphorie unit but apart from that no you have to work your way up to higher level position .

Also if you want to give her an additional weapon you may.

 

@@AnonBrony

I would call Shining Armor the commander-and-chief of House Moon and Star military.

Edited October 21, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[Miss Light Diamond 2,802]

@@EquestrianScholar,

 

They've both been edited!

[GreyScholar 1,584]

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I give the second and final approval to Crystal Fire and Red Wind.

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Okay I believe I've caught up which is why I'm going to make a request, I'm starting a project with a friend. I'd like everyones input and advice, as in many ways it could be considered an ambitious project.

 

 

http://mlpforums.com/topic/76343-a-defense-of-princess-celestia-by-princess-luna-analysis-project/?p=1942815

@@EquestrianScholar,

 

Also I looked at Golden Dawn just as you requested and there doesn't see to be any issues. Except Hollow Shades not being a town but I can assume the town probably went away when the Sisters disappeared and such. The bio is detailed and well done. Approved.

Actually Hollow Shades is a town on the official Equestria map put out by Hasbro, it just was never added to Equestia Divided Map so perhaps it was a town destroyed.

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What faction is Crystal Fiire in? If she's not part of a faction but factionless I'm going to now say the Uncertain Boundaries (a.k.a. factionless) is now close to players.

Edited October 21, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[Tricksters Pride 100]

What faction is Crystal Fire in? If she's not part of a faction but factionless I'm going to now say the Uncertain Boundaries (a.k.a. factionless) is now closed to players.

 

I'm going to now say the Uncertain Boundaries (a.k.a. factionless) is now closed to players.

 

closed to players.

 

.............Seriously i hate my luck sometimes. (sigh) I was sooooo frikin close to finishing, i just had to finish "Parents:", and put her in a location. But i'm running out of houses. (Even factionless isn't an option anymore.)